All Comments on 'Working to Please'

by mikey_5055

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Ok, but poor punctuation

Proper punctuation would make this story a lot easier to read and more interesting.

kurtrellianskurtrelliansover 14 years ago
Very erotic

The story was very arousing and erotic. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
AMAZING

Mikey your work is amazing. I couldn't help but play with my wet pussy while reading. I would LOVE to read some more.

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