All Comments on 'The Drive-In Pt. 02'

Nor your average stories, sorry I didn't leave a comment after part 1 but I couldn't wait to get to part 2. I like your style, and your content...really believable nothing phony to ruin a fantastic adventure.

Enjoying this, thanks

I'm waiting for part 3

you are a good story teller

Thank you. I just read Parts i and 2.

You write well and I with you continued success

Lisa is so much like R. my first real girlfriend. We knew each other from French class and seeing each other in the library. She was the eldest of five sisters and led the way for her siblings.

R was very much like like Lisa. Once she decided she liked me, she enjoyed everything and doing virtually, She was a very smart girl who liked being a cute exhibitionist; she completely uninhibited up to love-making; that we held off on for a bit.

Parts 1 and 2 bring back great memories

I will now read the rest of your stories and await any future stories.

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Great story, both Part 1 and Part 2.

I am 47 and remember going to the drive in as a child. By the time I was 16 or so, they had closed and turned into a flea market. So I never got to go on a date to a drive in.

I really like the story though, sounds similar to my early dating experiences, without all the talk of love, at least.

Thanks for posting them for us to read and enjoy!

The stories are well told, though a bit distracting to find your confusion between the verbs "lie" and "lay." If you can, convert throws to throes. And, alas, one does not peak to see what is happening--unless one is checking to see how much farther it is to the top. But I'm a devout worshiper at the altar of Grammar and Spelling.

Thanks for thinking enough of the story to critique my word choices. High praise indeed.

DriDrii

Drive-in memories. Thanks!

It is a great story it runs parallel with with happened to my dating life for some of the time. brought me back to a kinder gentler time.Remembering all the firsts, and wonderful memories of being a teen