All Comments on 'Yin / Yang'

assessment is based solely upon the first three pages. I'll have to get back to you once I've read the entirety but based upon intuition I'd have to stick with my initial judgement. It is always a pleasure to discover a new writer {new to this site} with a fresh and innovative view.

Clever plot twists and a thoroughly satisfying ending. Believeable characters and realistic dialogue. A welcome addition to this web site. Bravo and welcome!

i have to admit in the beginning i hated it i wanted to cry because of the way they treated her but as i kept on reading i loved it. the plot was amazing

A nice twist on the bdsm theme. I kept recalling scenes from V for Vendetta. And a happy ending, which didn't seem possible.

This was a great story, very well written and full of substance. I felt immersed into the world and I felt like it flowed seamlessly from scene to scene, only snapping me out of that "zen" during the fantastic sex scenes. The absolute domination that Nina had over Deline and the subsequent domination of Sarah fascinated me. No step in the sexual play was taken without asserting absolute control.

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. Helped me "relieve tension" many times. ;)