All Comments on 'Bathing on sand dunes in the Sahara'

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oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
vivid

pictures you paint

loved the line

"burned summer on my skin", loved the read today, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
colorful thoughts and

patterns framing the mind with morsels of warmth...blue

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
:)

beautiful descriptions and a sweet sentimental feel to this poem. I enjoyed reading

xoxo

maria

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowover 17 years ago
pretty imagery

"licked morse on my breasts" is very sexy. Sensual poem, WSO.

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