Wonderful! I usually do not like old-young pairings...but this story was absolutely awesome!
Looking forward to read more of your stories.
Patricia51 Its great to see you again i missed you i thought that boss of barbs was a real jerk to screw with Barb like that i loved Lee in the story she was a real looker and to have a woman like barb as a lover and confidant was great i hope to read more of Barb and Lee in there new practice.
An Attorney Lee falls for Barb and they make a decision to enjoy sweet love in spite of their age difference. A lovely little Story. Enjoyable Read! Great Write!
Patricia, it's great to get another great tale from you after so long.-.I really missed you! I hope that you give us the chance to read more of Barb and Lee in their new practice. Patti, you never fail to please us! Don’t keep us waiting! Pete.
Loved it! Really, truly did love it. BUT, I'm still disappointed. I wanted to READ how she tore a strip off of that old pock, and then quit. *sigh* Ah well, I'll just have to imagine, I suppose.
A sweet romance with a happy ending.
Just what the doctor ordered.
You humble me. I aspire to write anything as good as this !!!
A lovely story Patricia,
I enjoyed every moment, thesubtle twists and turns,
The sex was also lovley, hinted at.
Often, for me prefer the build up to the sex act itself in a good story rather than just the sex,
So thank you
I loved your story! I'm not big on the older-younger pairings either, but when you read stories that are of as high a quality as this one, it doesn't really matter. The love between two people is the only thing that really shines through. Thank you so much for sharing this story, it gives me hope that I will find a love like what you write of.
All of your stories have three things in common: eroticism, great prose and heart. Keep it up.
Still love it
Love the story, love how you wrote it. It's so nice to find a writer on the site.
Short, snappy, well-written, a nice little tale. Of course, I could see the ending coming a mile off (no twist in the tail there) but it didn't spoil things. I suppose in real life there are some ethical lawyers but like good news, they don't get the publicity. I see that you've written two other stories about Barb and Lee and I'm looking forward to reading them.
Usually when I read a lesbian story, I have mixed feelings. I can enjoy a lesbian story, especially if their is some type of seduction. But, I find if it's written by a lesbian ( or bisexual) it's written in such a way as to put all men "Down " and to convince all the women readers to become lesbians. Your 's wasn't like that. It was written simply for the reader to enjoy. P.S. Since my fetish is " seduction", and their wasn't much I couldn't given you a higher "Mark".
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