All Comments on 'My Promotion'

Good premise.

But the sex -- each time it happens -- begins too abruptly. And zooms ahead to the finish line.

Needed sex to start more slowly. With much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay.

For example, when Natalie appears wearing nothing but panties, why wouldn't she need to go over to him and rub his cock outside his pants? A great opportunity for a slow buildup and dialog about how long each has been thinking about sex with the other was missed altogether.

And she could have asked him if he ever masturbated while thinking of her? And what did he envision/imagine?

And she could have told him about her mastubatory practices thinking of him. And what she imagined doing to him. And him doing to her.

Four stars.

What is work husband when they go for even mutual masturbation only once, she offers consumating work husband only once late in the years and he refuses !!!! And then he does it ultimately to her ex boss!!!

I go on a lot of business trips with a male college we are both married but when we are away we fuck like rabbits and he took my anal cherry something I don’t let my husband do

Too long with too many obvious mistakes!

Not one of your best but not bad either. Keep writing.