All Comments on 'Coming Clean Ch. 04'

Really loved this story, and I’ve been waiting eagerly for the next part. You managed to achieve another level of interest and sophistication, with the conflicted emotions involved. I thought the dialogue was particularly effective. And it was very hot too! Everything I love about this sort of story. Please give us an epilogue. I feel like it needs a bit more resolution yet. Well done.

An excellent semi realistic t 4-part series of Coming clean

of Brenda & Ryan.

Can't wait for the epilogue wrap up

Catch Ya later

Cheers!

Too long.

Beautiful more please!

Thanks to all for wanting another chapter, but for now I'm going to try and get some other ideas rolling.

I always thought there’ll be a chapter where Brian would fuck Jackie, as she always was attracted to him.

Loved the story though it took a while for Brenda and Brian to finally have sex!! 5 stars.

Loved the story though it took a while for Brenda and Brian to finally have sex!! 5 stars.

Amazing what a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Very interesting plot. Looked forward to each additional chapter. 5++ stars.

Excellent story, loved the slow burn and the climax

I will admit curiosity as to whether Brenda's or Brian's thoughts of their future evolves.

Brenda idea of their future together greatly differs from Brian's level of commitment, there lays the question.

The two mothers should get together with their sons fucking them side by side. It’s only fair that Jackie should see it first hand since Brenda saw Jackie and her son fuck right in front of her.

Then they can eventually swap once they get comfortable about it.