by thatsbogus
Great story. A wonderful look at sexuality and not just a wham bam sex romp. You totally drew me in and I found myself wanting to read every word. There was no skimming and looking for the sex scene for me. This felt like it may have really happened, and that is the best kind of story. When fiction and reality blurr for me you have me hooked. 5 stars.
I'm going to look up some of your older works and see if they are as good as this.
Great story! Not sure that I'd last 9 pages without actual sex happening, but glad I didn't lose the contest. Thx. RT
Really sweet (but not saccharine). I really liked how Katie and Sonia blossomed as characters, becoming more and more complex under the pressure of events, as it were. A pleasure to read. Nice job.
Just brilliant! So simple, so low key and so hot. You did great to keep it all so real, just slowly escalating, and always the energy building and building. Wonderful!
Really well done, my friend - excellent character development and a very hot climax! As a bonus for me, something of a trip down memory lane since I have lived in both Toledo and Texas