by BreakTheBar
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OMG, so good. You have done an excellent job with bringing out the characters and making me really hate Heather, she really needs to go fuck her self. Anyway thanks for another great chapter of an amazing story.
Heather is completely hate able. It's awesome. I like that she is able to pull away some of the disdain some readers may have for Cassidy's behavior.
Unfortunately, the editing could have used another pass on this one. Besides, the occasional tense slip, one of the dares doesn't do what Robbie thought it did.
"Spin the bottle. Both of you need to make out with one member of the other couple, and they need to tell you who is the better kisser."
I read that as Robbie and Cassidy would kiss the same person. Either Wanda, Cattie, or Terra. Unless Heather was willing to kiss both Robbie and Cassidy, it wouldn't have been an issue.
Although, I'm sure Heather could have e found a way to make it an issue anyway.