All Comments on 'Coleoidphilia'

I think I (or maybe you Emily) need to thank your forum friends a thank you for suggesting this area. You certainly took the ball and ran with it. Funny and even thought-provoking, with your customary hot scenes in between. Maybe my new favourite. P

@PeterKimi - thanks, hun. I was kinda dreading this, but it ended up being a lot of fun. Maybe I need to do more stuff to stretch me (intentional innuendo). Em

You and your “I’m amazing at cunnilingus” complex. Honestly, babe, you’re good but not that good. A

Hot tentacle fun.

WOW! Emily that was absolutely brilliant. I loved the sci-fi mixed in with the erotica, brilliantly written and well imagined. This is a genre you could certainly excel in if you were to write more like this (and I hope you do) .

Rated at 5 stars and favourited too.

While tentacle sex is often non-con it certainly doesn't need to be. A very worthy addition to this genre, and hot. Easy 5*....although fuck I'd get annoyed with Alexa saying 'Hello, Emily' every time it needed to give me a reply. So 4.9999 stars.

As I'm partly responsible for this I think you should set me a challenge story. Fair's fair, right?

Amazing. You made me enjoy tentacle porn! Lmao!

Witty, funny, tongue firmly in cheek, sexy and just over-all fun to read.

Well done.

I'm so glad you incorporated cephalopod color changing communication/emotional expression! In a telepathic octopus! This was great.

That was a lot of fun. Very well done. Five easy stars.

This was awesome. It was fun it was sexy it was wild. I loved it.

@PrettyAmelia - I never noticed you complaining. Unless that high-pitched squeaky noise you make sometimes when excited was actually a complaint. Em

@MajorRewrite - thanks, hun. It was fun to write. Em

@Telugu1 - I like SciFi (nerd girl me) but never thought to write it. Thanks for the encouragement. Em

@Zenith77 - it was meant to be annoying and reflective of my own love-hate relationship with my Echo+, bitch never listens to me! Just thought as Bezos is in to space, having Alexa on board would be natural. Thanks for the support. Will think about a story challenge. Em

Well, for someone who didn't think she could write SciFi, you did a bloody good job. Congrats!

Take my five stars, dammit

David is such a cutie

Good stuff. I like my aliens a little more alien, but still good stuff.

@Djmac1031 - thanks, hun. So pleased you liked it 😊. Em

@djeip - I thought color was an obvious way to go, glad you liked it 😊. Em

@robriy1968 - thank you, hun 😊. Em

@Smarthominid2 - really happy you liked it 😊. Em

@Rustyoznail - thank you 😊. Em

@Anonymous - thank you for the vote octopus lover 😊. Em

@sporgaabored - I compromised a little 😊. Em

You win on vocabulary alone. A very intriguing, mind bending read. I only chose alien as your assignment because I knew it would stretch your reach. Loved it.

Emily, you really kicked ass on this one. Loved it

A nice mixture or themes and scenarios and of course sex! Would love to read a sequel or a second part.

The benefits of writers that are less familiar with a genre... those are the ones that come up with something new and unexpected. Well done. When can we expect your story featuring Blob?

@A_Gentle_Mann - thanks, hun 😊. Em

@Ic69hunter - glad you liked it 😊. Em

@CelticTiger88 - thank you, not sure how a sequel would work, might be repetitive unless I had some new idea, but happy that you want more. Em

@RubenR - thank you. Do I have to go research blob sex now, I’m still scarred from the tentacle porn 😬. Em

Wholesome tentacle porn! How fun! I really like the light-heartedness of your style.

@CyranoJ - that’s what I was going for 😊. Thanks. Em

For someone who'd never written sci-fi you've nailed the tropes to the wall. The jargon, the scene setting, the engaging character, some juicy smut. Cudos, young lady, nicely done.

@electricbkue66 - thanks, hun. I’ve never tried to write Sci-Fi, but have obviously read and watched it. Em

Being restricted to giving only 5 stars saddens me. I'm usually not a fan of tentacle porn, but this story transformed my software to hardware in record time. Bravo!

Really well done, especially for your first foray into Sci-fi. Sexy and fun!

@Limnophike - thank you. I wasn’t a fan either, but managed to find a way to turn it into stuff I like 😊. Em

@Smuttyandfun - thanks - I think I got into my stride with the sequel - Em

This was a very enjoyable and interesting take on the erotic tentacle concept. It was different. I agree with Cyrano that your light-hearted, playful style is appealing. My style is also generally light-hearted but my own tentacle story is probably one of my "heaviest" stories in tone. Yours take the idea in a completely different direction, with fun results! Nice job.

@SimonDoom - thank you for the kind words. Em

i was advised to read you and i think you are a very talented writer, if your age in your bio is correct,, your beyond your years . great imagination and very pretty as well. everyone has a gift.yours obviously is writing. mine is communicating with spirits.sometimes very intense. i have many stories that are unlike anything you have heard before. I wish I could write because I know Im suppose to share my experiences. Let me know if i have peaked your interest. maybe you could make some stories from them..gmann60son@gmail

@Gmann006 - thanks for the kind words. I’m a scientist by background, but have always loved words. I have a backlog of my own unfinished stories and a couple of collaborations on the go at present. So I don’t want to commit to anything else right now. Maybe we could talk in a few months. Em

You are a good writer, to take a subject you have no interest in, my your imagination sure made it write as if you have the octo fever!

@patillie - (spelt your name right this time!). Thank you for the kind words. It was a challenge, but I had.a blast. Writing this concluding episode of the trilogy as we speak. Em

This was a fantastically adventurous story. You took on sci fi well and I think you are a natural. I hope to write as well as you do one day!

@Priscilla_June - thank you, hun. You are too kind. Em

NoTalentHack's stories have mowed down more bonage than diabetes. Turns out that in addition to that incredible skill, he has a good eye for talent. This is not something I would have gone anywhere near, but I'm so glad I did. It was absolutely delightful. Do I feel dirty and ashamed? Sure do! My thanks to the author. 5

@Anon - thank you. It was my first effort in the genre and I felt kinda the same as you at first. Em

Interesting but didn't ring my bell.

The automated sexual stimulation reminded me of LOVE CONQUERS ALL by Fred Saberhagen.

@Grendelpuppy - sorry to hear, hun. Try the next instalment and see if that is more to your taste. Em

There’s a lot that I’m going to say about this, but all that really matters is that you’ve done an amazing job.

I’ve had this on my list for a few months, but I’m so glad that I’ve finally managed to get to it. From the outset, it was abundantly clear that you’re a skilled writer and the hook in the beginning was creative and intriguing. You created a sci-fi environment that was both credible and well-developed and I felt right at home with it.

What I loved was that you showed an ability to inject humour and levity to the proceedings, but in a manner where you took the readers with you. I was able to laugh with you, not at you, which isn’t the easiest tightrope to walk with your chosen theme. The line about Tushy was a good example of that as it came right out of the blue, but didn’t ruin the experience.

But I was floored by the way you seemingly flicked a switch and brought so much heat to the affair. I thought I had the measure of this until I read: "Alexa! Security restraints. Testing only." That scene *got* me in a way that I never expected and was hot enough to melt my screen. Before I sleep tonight, I’ll have “"Alexa! Security restraints” on my mind, but the part about “testing only” will be notably absent. That’s such a powerful tool in your arsenal because you’ve demonstrated an ability to tease the reader with your playful, girl-next-door tone, only to crack the whip and have the reader panting in the blink of an eye.

There were only a few issues that stood out. Some standard grammar and formatting issues were noticeable, mainly with inaccuracies in capitalising job titles and missing numerals, but I thought the part where Emily calls for "Alexa! Penetrator. Mid-sized. Realistic. Pussy. Slow but deep. Vibrator. Level 2. Clit” was ill-considered. The user would’ve condensed a command like that into a single word, a wrapper, for discretion and convenience. Additionally, you’ve developed a habit of bloating some of your sentences which harms the flow.

Perhaps the bigger issue was that your descriptions of sexual content are a little cold and clinical in places, which doesn’t align well with a verbosity in your narration that included the word “twixt”. Your work is great, you don’t need to try and do too much. Especially if it’s only for the reader to think you’re intelligent.

Someone will have to explain to me why your average ratings aren’t higher because the quality of your work is tremendous. Finding the right balance between storytelling and arousing the reader is hard enough, but to do it while adding the right kind of humour and intensity? Well done.

80/100. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

@ Stacnash - thank you for the both kind and balanced review. I’m glad you found things to like .Coleoidphilia was my first real attempt to write something with no auto-biographical hooks. I think it came out pretty well. I also think my style has calmed down a bit in my most recent works, like Off The Shoulder, Jacob’s Progress, A Good Woman and Mors Immatura. I only started writing a year ago and have a long way to go. Thanks again, Em.

This was a great read. It isn't my general area of interest but I your prose was very tight - nothing superfluous, everything to the point in the right amount. I agree with previous comments that you created an internally coherent world, and kudos for doing that so succinctly. 5 stars, of course.

@HorsHolm - that’s lovely feedback and very encouraging. Thank you 😊. Em

My god your imagination. That was insane. intensely erotic and insane. I absolutely loved it. I want an octopus, too... :)

@ShelbyDawn57 - thank you so much for saying. Glad you liked it 😊 Em

That was really fun…

@victoria14xs - it was fun to write. No trope left unused 😊 Em

I really liked this story, Sci-fi and sex, could there be a better combination?

A futanari Emily, there goes my delicious mental images again! 😉

@Vitriolhack - thank you. I did write a Futanari version of me, try Something Has Come Up 😊. Emily

I enjoyed this story very much. It was well written and had just enough to it. Maybe a little slow at the begin, but it a good story. I feel the same way about the nonconsenual with a lot of tentacle.

@BlueEyeDreamer75 - thank you. After having written three episodes of Coleoidphilia, I came back to it for a 750 word story. Would like to write another full length story in the same universe. Emily

Yeessssssss so good!

@AshleyLee12 - thank you so much 😊 Emily

I was surprised that this isn't a familiar genre for you, because you did so well making it sound scientifically sophisticated. You're a gifted storyteller, and I enjoyed your futuristic sex bot, it was funny and also believable - sometime in the distant future.

Well, what's really left to say except the obvious, sex with an octopus is gross!

@DeniedLoserWatching - thanks. The story is about rather more than appears on the surface. 😊 Emily