All Comments on 'Magical Essence Ch. 06'

This is John, the author, I want to apologize for the errors in the text. I uploaded the wrong draft of the story and was not able to get it taken down in time. So the draft that was edited (and subsequently had a little more content) was not the one that you see here.

I might consider uploading it alongside but I'll see how this goes.

u should but the other on as a side to this chapter just because u have a great story line and dont want to leave us hanging like this do u!?!

keep the chapters coming. i'm enthralled...

Keep 'em coming, can't wait to read more!

I really like everything you've written. Please write more as I'm dying to find out how all of the stories take shape and, finally, conclude.