by IsabellaEmily
You never disappoint your mind must be so inventive, but then the body is such a wonderful playground it is only right we try as many rides as possible, what a wonderful world.
This story is no exception. Sophisticated and precise choice of words. Do you even realize how many people you manage to turn on with your imagination? I was extremely hard myself while reading. I am even leaking a bit of precum without even touch my cock. I created an account here so I could comment on a story like this.
Be blessed!
5 stars. To quote you in your opening statements--
"Usually, I don't bother to publish these quick stories that have little plot except for people in them fucking, but I'm submitting this one".
Well damn you IsabellaEmily, you SHOULD publish these quickies. This was HOT, HOT, HOT! Sometimes a reader just wants a quick shot of adrenalin (or whatever) to wake up to and start their day. This story was one of them. So, thank you, and my wishes for many more like this.
Short, sexy fun. Post more, sometimes we want that nice slow arousal and making love, other times we want that quick satisfying fuck! Whether you write long or short your way with words draws us in. Very satisfying :)
Cheers, Andy
Well this proves that not only are you the Mistress of the longer multi chapter stories, you can also turn out a deliciously dirty quickie as well! An outstanding effort, IsabellaEmily. It deserves every one of the 5 stars I've given it.
So hot I hope this continues maybe even adding a neighbor or two. It definitely works for me kept me hard and leaking precum
One of many immensely erotic lines. Beautifully written in ever manner. Based on a true psychological understanding of those looking in from the inhibited outside.
Long or short, you’ve proved that you can do both with super hot erotic justice!
Obviously with a short story there is little build up, but it also means you have to go straight into the fucking, and that is absolutely perfect for me. Lots of swapping went on in such a short time and was topped off by the girls indulging in a little sapphic pleasure on their own - I want to read about Kenzie going down on Emily and cleaning up a dirty cream pie that has been left by BOTH the guys.
Great story. Chock full of sex without tons of extraneous and sometimes boring setup. But extremely well written, unlike some of the amateurish junk I've found in my search for erotic writing. Just what I need when I don’t feel like spending a whole afternoon or evening reading, just to get to the sex. It had me hard and leaking precum the whole time. It was like edging (without ever touching my cock) while my wife sat just a few feet away, oblivious to my dirty secret.
Nothing like a short little foursome story to make my day! Four Friends Fucking is beyond raging Hottttt! ...and yes a Kinky Orgasm was had thanks to your sensational story telling!
Very hot short story with so many possibilities if your desire takes you I’d love too read a second chapter.