All Comments on 'A Shoe Store Show'

a favorite of mine. Though my wife would never do it. It was a hot stroy til she started having multiple O's too unrealistic.

I have always wanted to see a situation like that. Please continue more about her showing off. Please add some pictures of your wife's sexy legs, pusy and butt.

The only real problem I see is him touching her sex, you dont know what is on his fingers, and rubbing him off and his bodily fluids touching her fingers. A bit risky there but otherwise good clean fun.

It was quite good, but the squirting part is rather unrealistic.

Nice short story. You worked the seduction rather nicely for a short story. MOst of this length screw it up by jumping right into the sex. Keep writing about your wife's adventures

I would like shoes in the next story. Maybe some boots, so the store clerk can touch her leg all the way up.

I really enjoyed this one and would love to see you write more.......and soon.

Loved the story - so much that I've read it quite a few times! A shoe store visit with a garter belt and stockings has always been a big fantasy. Thanks for this - look forward to whatever other stories you write!

The storyline is hardly original, but many of us find it enjoyable.

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Her sassiness and her husband's reluctance were nice touches.

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The story is competently written, but I prefer more imagery to make events vivid. For example, the salesman sweating, the appearance and texture of her thighs and pussy, her nether mouth drooling onto the inside of her dress, her three little erections, her swollen nether lips.

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Thanks for a good tale.

I enjoyed it.

But I feel compelled to reply to two of the earlier commenters.

Multiple orgasms and squirting are "unrealistic"? No wonder you want to remain anonymous. You've no idea!

you should have let him fuck her as you watched.what a turn on for both of you.

She should have pulled his cock out and jacked him off until he shot his cum into one of her high heel pumps!

your story was so hot I have a ragging hard on. I was thinking the shoe sales man was me and I was playing with your wife.55ac .

Great story, my wife and I have done this a few times, and once she went in to the back of the store with the salesman and came back with a pussy full of cum, I loved it.

Showing off for All Bundy, and some idiot anonymous has a "my wife and I" lie about a shoe salesman. There are some real keepers here.

I liked it a lot. My wife and I have done the same thing, but only once. She just showed him her charms . Didn’t go any farther.