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KinPAKinPA12 months ago

Perfect…just perfect.

bigbob2406bigbob240612 months ago

Marvellous.Thank you.

buran288buran28812 months ago

Very Well done!!!

ArkSoutherngentArkSoutherngent12 months ago

Great Story, thank you

Wildbill314Wildbill31412 months ago

Outstanding! Someone really gets it!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

In Flanders Fields, the poppies blow

Between the crosses, row on row,

That mark our place; and in the sky

The larks, still bravely singing, fly

Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the dead. Short days ago

We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,

Loved and were loved, and now we lie,

In Flanders fields

Take up our quarrel with the foe:

To you from failing hands we throw

The torch; be yours to hold it high.

If ye break faith with us who die

We shall not sleep, though poppies grow

In Flanders fields.

BlueFox007BlueFox00712 months ago

You made this Viet Nam war veteran’s day.

Well done. Thank you.

An easy five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Excellent story,

MrkeenenhMrkeenenh12 months ago

Brought tears to my eyes several times as I remembered my father in law’s funeral with military honors. Thank you for such a good read and written with such honor for those who gave their all.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

In Australia we observe 2 days, ANZAC day (April 25), and Remembrance Day (Nov 11). ANZAC day is a day of ceremonies and services. We start with a dawn service then move onto a parade involving current service members and veterans from all services.

ANZAC day has become a day of remembering the sacrifices and service and is a unifying day. We celebrate the day with my fellow navy veterans and tell stories of our time in the service.

Thank you to all who have served, especially those who have been injured and to those who have paid the ultimate price for our freedom, we salute you all!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Having spent 5 tours in Nam I understand what you are feeling even though this is a story about someone else. Thanks for reminding everyone what Memorial Day should be about

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Thank you. You made me remember a lot of things and I’ve shed a bunch of tears as I thought back to both Vietnam and Germany.

misty_1misty_112 months ago

This veteran says thank you

des911des91112 months ago

Well done and thank you

steppinontoessteppinontoes12 months ago

The prologue and poem should be broadcast on every station and printed in every newspaper on Memorial Day in honor of those who gave all

Excellent story

postoak2020postoak202012 months ago

Thank you and welcome home

MACV Advisor 68-69

keepercoach01keepercoach0112 months ago

Excellent story! 5*

OvercriticalOvercritical12 months ago

There's a grabber of there ever was one. As an ROTC commissioned engineer (Chemical Corps) I can identify with Rick (the younger) although I never was in combat. I knew other officers in my basic class who did go into combat and a couple who didn't make it back from Viet Nam. I can't identify with the emotions shown here, but I can appreciate their feelings and the close feelings I have for my country and those that fought for her. 5*

DrizdartDrizdart12 months ago

There's an easy 5 star choice.

My Dad served in WWII and was much like the man you write about. There were hints about his service while I was growing up and I saw the medals in his desk drawer. I know he talked about the service with some of the young men around us who had enlisted or been drafted -- nephews, kids from the church, a couple in a neighborhood.

But he didn't talk about it with my sisters or me ... not until he was in his 80s and we were preparing to bury my Mom in a Veterans Cemetary. And not much then, either. It wasn't until he was in his 90s that he gave us a copy of an interview he'd been asked to do as part of an oral history project, and then asked if we had any questions about what we heard.

He wanted to do the best he could, the most he could, and he wanted my sisters and I to grow up and NOT have to go to war.

fixer43fixer4312 months ago

To the admins. This should be reposted at the top of the list on 5/29.

A_BierceA_Bierce12 months ago

Needed to be told, and no one better to tell it. Kudos, Ronde.

Smiffy69Smiffy6912 months ago

Thank you. My dad was a WWll bomber pilot owner Europe who thankfully survived. A huge number didn’t. He didn’t talk much about it either. He stayed in the RAF until he retired so we all saw his medal ribbons though, and his wings, which he was entitled to wear. RIP Dad.

teedeedubteedeedub12 months ago

Bravo. Great timing. Should be required reading. Thank you.

LokikatLokikat12 months ago

Great story! Thank you from a veteran.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Not enough stars...just the prologue and epilogue had me in tears...it's the same in any country...thank you

A Jamaican Veteran

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Outstanding, Not sure if you are a Vet or if you know one. I personally have a hard time with Memorial Day. I still ask that question why did I come back and not Dave. USN Vet

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I normally don’t comment on stories but yours opened up a bit of my past that pretty well has stayed buried. I lost a fair amount of friends in that jungle paradise and I think it’s time to talk with those that survived.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

of the best on this site............Korea 1950

sdoc9612sdoc961212 months ago

WOW. Very good story and the poem really hit the spot.

TwarboneTwarbone12 months ago

Wish there was a sixth star.

muskyboymuskyboy12 months ago

As a veteran, this was a terrific Memorial Day story. As a romance, it was a successful Daddy-hunt story. The story was built on his survivor's guilt and didn't really feel very romantic. The romance was the too often forgotten tribute to all our veterans, thanks for that.

wayniepoo62wayniepoo6212 months ago
Lest We Forget

Here in Australia, as well as in New Zealand, we commemorate ANZAC Day, 25th April.

They shall grow not old, as we that are left grow old: Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn. At the going down of the sun and in the morning We will remember them.

Lest We Forget.

hang1022hang102212 months ago

I enjoy most of your stories, but this one is the best so far. Thanks for honoring our vets. My Dad served 21 years and did 2 tours in SE Asia during Vietnam. He had 3 oldest brothers that served in WWII. Thankfully none of them were injured and all returned home. One of them was at D-Day. During the time frame after D-Day, he and a buddy both got food poisoning from food sent from home that they shared. Both were put in a military hospital. While in the hospital, their entire unit was wiped out. My Uncle was released, and then the hospital was hit and his buddy died. My Uncle rarely talked about his time in the service. I myself never served, but I definitely appreciate the time and sacrifice of my family members and others that did serve.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Well-told tale, but I wonder about the drinking age in the Vietnam War era. Also, there’s a difference between feint and faint. This author seems capable of evoking emotional responses across a wide range of story lines.

dleethomas58dleethomas5812 months ago

Thanks. Needed to be told.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Lest we forget.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

As I read this story it reminded me of something I read in a newspaper some years ago. It was the story of an army veteran who was originally from one of the Latin American countries. He had enlisted in the U.S. Army, served his enlistment honorably and received an honorable discharge and then been caught up in an INS raid in his employment and as a result deported. He had not fought in Vietnam but had been in the Army and deployed either to Panama or possibly Desert Storm. It upset me because to my mind, if a foreign national is allowed to join our armed forces and serves faithfully and receives an honorable discharge he or she should have been considered to have fulfilled at least the minimum requirement to receive a green card or be granted citizenship.

Conversely, some years later I was visiting a friend in Virginia and visited the D-day memorial. There was a group of probably 25 to 30 couples in the group. The docent asked how many were veterans, and I was the only veteran in the group other than the docent.

I thought it wrong that of all of these folks who were born here and did not join the military, one foreign national who had served faithfully years previously and was stationed in harm's way had been deported.

mac1729mac172912 months ago

Very well told

Thank you for writing

Crusader235Crusader23512 months ago

Thank you for this wonderful veteran story. Semper Fi from this old Nam Marine.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy12 months ago

Excellent story with great characters! Thanks for writing it.

5

MorraRoseMorraRose12 months ago

So thoughtful and true. People don't understand veterans' experience unless they've been there. Even simply being stationed far from friends and family for a long time affects you, even if you haven't necessarily seen combat. I think this is a piece that should be read in high school (well, minus the 'intimate' part!), because it puts such a human touch on history. As far as Memorial Day is concerned, I often also take a moment to think about the mothers and fathers who have lost children to war. They have to live with it every day, and that, too, is a great sacrifice.

J6480J648012 months ago

Exceptional Ronde, you write with the feeling of someone who's is a vet and you had me recalling things I thought I'd buried long since.

5*s keep the creative juices flowing man

crazycujocrazycujo12 months ago
Thanks!

Brings back a few memories for an old Army Nam vet! Thanks for the story!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Your best story yet and that is really saying something because you've shared many excellent ones. I'm not in the USA but you captured perfectly what we all owe to those who have served. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the emotion you stirred in me as I absorbed this story.

alwayshomealwayshome12 months ago

Wow you sure know how get emotions awake that had been dormant for a very long time. Well done!!!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc12 months ago

Given his attraction and competition for Alice in high school, the part where he was reluctant to start a relationship after Ricky died was a bit of a plot stretch, as was his neutral reaction when he found out she married Rick while he was in the Army. I get why you tried to minimize it, but it didn't quite work for me. I absolutely loved the prologue and the sentiment in it could marry with today's general population. They wouldn't get what serving, combat or otherwise, in the military in far away lands. 5*

RendeRende12 months ago

A very good Story, Brings back alot of memories to this Old Vet. 5 Stars..

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Very well written with excellent advice as if written by one who has experienced the rigors of war and the knowledge life will bring if we listen.

I have never (thank God) seen combat but have trained many hours for it.

Well done my friend. I feel the pain.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I never served, but my father was U S Navy during WWII. He never saw action—he was among those lining up for the invasion of Japan when the war ended—but he knew plenty who did and was prepared to lay his life on the line if needed. Whether they saw combat or not, all who have served are due our deepest respect, regardless of the wisdom of the mission assigned to them by their civilian masters. We must always remember this. 5 star story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A tremendous patriotic Romance. Plot shows real understanding. characters are rich and deep. 5*

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great story hits close to home for me

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

"...you're old enough to kill

but not for voting

You don't believe in war

but what's that gun you're toting?"

5-stars

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I'm not a combat veteran but except for the descriptive sex (not knocking its inclusion) I consider this a very respectful story for Memorial Day and our Military.

drycreeksdrycreeks12 months ago

Awesome fning story right on the money u r 10 stars

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Amen, like those before me, amen.

jlg07jlg0712 months ago

Outstanding story for memorial day!

RasmatRasmat12 months ago

An excellent story. Luckily, my lottery number was 312 for the the draft. I had and have friends and family who are veterans; some lifers, some, like my best and oldest friends wife, a Filipino Navy Chief, serve their 20 and count the days 'til that wake-up.

I fear for the safety and sanity of our rank and file,today, in light of the questionable leadership of our military today with it's pervasive "WOKENESS" and DEI indoctrination.

Let's not forget the Navy's drag queen enlistment ad in the wake of Bud lite and Miller lite.

Kathy1211Kathy121112 months ago

Great story!! You understand how a combat veteran feels, all those memories but they don't talk about it very much. Please keep posting your stories.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago
Beautiful story

I understand. Been there done that, got the T-Shirt.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Awesome. Until you go through it you fon't know.

devildog0302devildog030212 months ago
THANK YOU

It was outstanding…

woodrangewoodrange12 months ago

one hell of a story.makes me understand veteran family members better. thank you

ygbsmgcygbsmgc12 months ago

Truly inspiring story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Sometimes it is good for us old farts to hear that in our younger days we weren't simply baby killers.

BTW good to see you back. The new stories are even better than the old.

MountainMan1336MountainMan133611 months ago

THANK YOU

Thank You for reminding us all that while we try to forget, we never shall forget. It is something that shall live in our memories forever.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I think about friends who are on the wall as well as those who didn't die in combat. One died going to get his parents to show them his son. Too many and too young. Thank you, Mike

goatman96goatman9611 months ago

You handled the military/veteran parts quite well. Nicely done. Been there, done that. Vietnam.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well done, and great job telling it "like it is/was". 5***+

OU8ME2ICOU8ME2IC11 months ago

Thank you for sharing your feelings about honoring the men and women of the armed forces. I hope that anyone who reads this story will be touched and will show gratitude on Memorial and Veterans Day.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen1510 months ago

According to Wiki quotes the poem is "It is the Soldier". Beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I argie hole heartly , beside i live in country hasn't been in combate nearly 70 years since WWII.

The peaceorganisation is nessasery but sometimes you have to fight to stop tyranny.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very good story. It certainly brings back a lot of memories. Some good and some not. I really enjoyed the story, it reads more like a personal experience narrative than a fictional story for the ‘net. Certainly a Five Star effort.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AMREB77AMREB779 months ago

All I can say is OOH RAHH!!!

mbh129mbh1299 months ago

Damn fine read!! Think I'll have it read when I die. I have an aunt that made a video about my dad and his time in the Air Force (Korea). Came out pretty good. Asked her if she'd start doing the WW2 vets before they all die. and try to get the Korean war and Viet Nam guys too. Sorry, hasn't happened yet.

KEEP IT FLYING!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Too old people

Ravenwolf13Ravenwolf138 months ago

From a veteran, albeit in a different country, thank you.

HaroJohn710HaroJohn7108 months ago

Navy, but there's Army in the family. Thank you!

ChrisrovChrisrov7 months ago

As a returned serviceman truthful and on point….

Some gave all…

Lest We Forget….

VaguewriterVaguewriter7 months ago

Great story. My dad did talk to me about the horrors of WWII. I can't say that I understood, but I think it helped him. I once asked him if he remembered the men he killed. His response was "Everyday".

He died s few years back, and I think he's finally at rest. We owe so much to our veterans.

crazymike45crazymike457 months ago

Always remember...

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Salute!!!!

And in the morning we will remember the..

afosi2604afosi26046 months ago

Excellent story. I can just imagine this having happened to someone in real life. We done!

oldebarristeroldebarrister6 months ago

I read this again on Veterans Day 2023. This honors our veterans like few stories can as it is about the life and memories they live with

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

A sad but full of love story! A story full of truth, honor and humility! We can never forget the sacrifices made for freedom.

jwoodiejwoodie5 months ago

They grow not old, as we who are left grow old...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

sooooooooo well done as i read through my tears, a gold star dad,,,,,,,

Peapod41Peapod413 months ago

There is a particular ethos concerning conflict: old warriors and the way they speak of war

between themselves they would hardly ever share with "non-combatants". Our Memorisl Day is called Anzac Day and much the same things go on here as do in the U.S. Boozing, Bragging,

Regrets and remorse. Thank you for using your art and craft to remind us.

PhredDaggPhredDagg3 months ago

5 stars are not enough.

LivingWordsLivingWords3 months ago

I’m one of those that went in as a kid and came out a man, 5 years Army. Biggest regret I have is getting out.

Thanks for your wonderful story!

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