All Comments on 'Learning How to Deep Throat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another story about a pathetic piece of shit -----

Who can only get hard thinking of forcing girls to service them=

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting Story

The only thing I did not like about this story was the author's use of second person in telling the story.This of course led to a lot of "you" usage which was a distravtion to the story.

Third person or even first person would make this story flow far better.Otherwise this is a very creative author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

bad language

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