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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/30/07

Great Story

I hope part 2 is cumming!

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by Anonymous08/30/07

Enjoyed It

I enjoyed the interaction between the loving, married couple as they discussed their desires.

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by Anonymous08/30/07

perfect!

i felt the humiliation seep into my mind with each passing moment. Loved it!

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by billinhr08/30/07

Wonderful

Great story!! Hope you have a follow up for this one. It really got me hard reading this. Wish I could get my wife to do something like this to me. I would love it!!!!

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by Anonymous08/30/07

EXCELLENT

The best story I've read in a while, please keep it going, love the rivalry aspect!

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by Anonymous08/30/07

deletions

this author must be deleting comments because this story would get negative responses

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by Scorpio4408/30/07

Poor pitiful bastard

Not very well written,IMHO, and certainly not a pleasent story. Typos and such didn't help.

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by Anonymous08/30/07

Who is writing the comments ?

Who is writing the comments ? Strange that all the comments uses the same style of writing and all are 100. Personally I vote 0. Bad writing, bad plot, bad characters, in short bad author. And yes I am Anonymous simply because this site is too bad to bother registering. MAYBE once in a while a good story is published but lately the crap is getting out of hand

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by Anonymous08/30/07

Zero Is What It Deserves

Another wimp husband story and one that reads exactly like all the other wimpy husband stories.

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by Anonymous08/30/07

A 30 yr old virgin?

I'm sorry, I didn't like this story. Not because it was another "wimp" story...but because it was not consistent. The wife was a 30 yr old virgin? Why? If she was as hot as the author says, then why was she a virgin? Morals? IF so, then why weren't they evident when other guys were making on her? This supposed tough guy won't tell the other guys to back off? Why not? Because he was secretly turned on? If so, then what about his previous girlfriends. This was not about humiliation, it was about disrespect and control. Her actions were not based on love of her husband but on the fact that she despised her husband...how is that a turn on. Sorry elia..it had potential but it fell waaay short of the mark. Don't be discouraged, you're writing will improve if you keep at it.

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by Anonymous08/30/07

And you're a cop!!!!!!

God help the citizens in the city you patrol. God help us all if they let fucked up sad examples for a man in the police now a days.

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by Anonymous08/30/07

Your old wimp saw over and over and over

Single huh. Sounds like no respect just like this sewer runoff. A person who used to be a man gets into male humiliation because there ain't nothing else left anymore.

No self respect and no respect from those around him. To have such a low opinion of yourself is beyond sad. It approaches concern for the self cuckster and those around him.

A shell has no human values and progresses towards no conscience which can become worse with either wanting to get caught or going deeper into the morass of inhuman crudeness.

Since you have been at this for years it won't be long.

A real shame as there is talent lost on the extreme few into human self degradation. Get some help little sick one.

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by gatorhermit08/30/07

Divorce coming

Author and lead male character both need a shrink.

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by trooper608/31/07

Great story

Wonderful story. For those who do not understand the need should keep their comments to themselves and move onto vanilla boring stories. The story does stretch the limits of being so open in front of all co-workers. But, it worked for me. I have been teased by my wife a couple times while she let other men grope her. It is all in fun. Keep it up.

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by bruce2208/31/07

Vivid

I thought it was a good story. I hated what it described
but it looks to me as if you did what you set out to do and
deserve full marks. I probably won't read the next one!

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by Anonymous08/31/07

Those that dont understand the need? Perhaps

those are the same people that have no need of the shrink! Once someone has enough adverse comments and low scores perhaps one should reconsider their story and perhaps lifestyle.

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by Anonymous08/31/07

nice

loved it hiction or not it was so hot to me

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by Anonymous08/31/07

nice

loved it hiction or not it was so hot to me

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by peggytwitty08/31/07

Humiliation is not loving wives

It really needs to go in to BDSM, this submissive and humiliation is not loving wives but by passing.PT

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by Anonymous09/01/07

excellent story

That story was great, can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous09/06/07

Moralistic bullshitters

Why do you read these stories anyway.

elia_cdl is a great writer no matter the topic.

And this IS for the loving wives section of course. Everything she does, she does it for her hubby. More loving than this?

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by Anonymous01/16/08

mmm I luv humiliation too!

my ex was a hot 23yo party girl and a real bitch (i luv that tho) after dating for a year she started making embarrasing remarks about the size of my dick or telling her girlfriends that I was a panty thief and how she caught me jerking off sniffing her moms dirty underwear in the bathroom!! I would get soo turndon and she knew it!! she also loved teasing me until I had blue balls then making me beg her 4a handjob...one night her friend was there and they kept talking about sum cute guy from work and she begged her friend to invite him over. He showed up and he was a prick (a big bouncer) and right off the bat my gf started making remarks about guys with small dicks and dared us to compare! omg I said no way as I blushed then he stoodup and said what are u ashamed of man...the girls giggled as he slid his dick out then gasp omg its huge, I was so embarrassd as I slowly exposed my limp 4" and trying not to stare at his!!

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by Anonymous01/16/08

Bio says enough

Over 60 and single - you were an opera singer I presume with the help of El Castrador or was it an accident? It's actually quite fun to read about neutered men, apart from you, do they really exist?

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by Anonymous08/10/08

some wishes should not be granted

the title said it all, and the story NOT read. some desires should not be granted

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by LPCream10/06/08

Great Story

Really enjoyed that, one of the best stories I've read in a long long time.

Thanks very much :)

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by Anonymous02/14/09

humiliated

The only one that should be humiliated is this sick author, how did you get to be over 6o.

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by Anonymous05/07/09

Here's a bet for you author...

10K says you haven't been fucked in the last 30 years... you've lead a pathetic life fucking your palm, so you get off posting this purile trash. Why don't you escape life with a good old healthy drug habit or something.

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by Anonymous10/25/09

What a fucking disgusted story.

This so called writer is nothing less than a parasite. Why not try another line of work?

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by Anonymous11/14/09

nice

everyone says bad comments. someone that reads the story means than he search it and loves it. so stop saying shit about author and the story.
the story was great

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by Anonymous11/18/09

Great sexy story - def write more !

Funny to see the same old negative bitch ass comments written on the cuck stories - all written by sad guys who trawl the site looking for them, then slag them off because they can't handle the fact IT TURNS THEM ON !!

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by Anonymous12/24/09

Hot, Hot, Hot!

This story was excellent. The only thing that would have made it better is if several of the guys at the party were doing her at once and with the door open for everyone to see they started to shoot their loads all over her slutty face. Facials rule.

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by Anonymous02/21/10

absolute garbage...

and extremely sad that the author feel the need to leave false posts. How pathetic... right up there with ridiculous behavoir of the people in his posting. elia_cdl you make the same sad mistake that so many childish male authors do on this site.... you assume, with your pea-sized brain that women want to be whores and gang fucked.... you're such a child. Let's reverse the story... and your wife wants to be humiliated, she wants to be embarrassed by your behavoir... so she tells you that she wants to watch you get fucked by a horse and a goat so you go out and do it right. Yeah, right you fuck wade. get a real life, and don't post more on this site. This site is for SEX and EROTIC material which your story had NONE.

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by Anonymous04/08/10

need part 2

I loved this story and think you need to follow up with part 2

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by doctoryes4807/27/10

Incredibly hot

I too almost came in my pants reading this. Bravo - well written and very very erotic. Thanks

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by jonjonz6811/27/10

to the various anonymous critics of this great story

Don't worry. I'm almost certain your wives won't step out on you.

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Amaaaaaazzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnnnngggggggg!!!!!!!!!1

Wow! This is without doubt one of the best hottest stories here. Take the negative comments as positive. They show that it was great enough to generate anger from over-sensitive people who don't understand the concept of the "loving wives" section. If it did not fit here the administrators would not put it here. They do read everything before putting it on their website after all.

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by DWornock08/08/11

After all, he is a cop.

What else would you expect from a cop?

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by Afooja09/06/11

Believable? Who cares

Hotten than hell. Not only humiliated but humiliated by his colleagues he has to work with who will be spreading the word everywhere. Very nice touch to have him visibly cum, so the know he's getting off on all this.

I kept wanting to quit, being unable to imagine cops doing this to a brother, but kept coming back for more. My thanks to the author for huge rush.

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by Anonymous09/06/11

Dwmoronock has an irrational thing against cops

that tool gives any story with a police officer in it 1*

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by Anonymous02/18/12

EXTREME humiliation!!!

This whole situation is ball-blasting fun. He could be a teacher or an office worker. Why is anyone worried that the cuy is a cop???? I can't believe someone would read this story unless he was turned on by it. Hot humiliation story!!! PLEASE write many more chapters. One of the HOTTEST stories I have ever read. I like all of your stories, but this is the best. More chapters , please.

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by Anonymous02/28/12

THIS MAN SHOULD TAKE HIS PISTOL PUT IT IN HIS MOUTH AND PULL THE TRIGGER

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by Anonymous04/03/12

i wish I had a gun

I would pull a VA Tech and kill the author and the fags that like this crap

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by Anonymous05/17/12

To all you guys who write negative comments on these type of stories ;

Seriously, what were you expecting to read when you logged onto a sex story website and then clicked on a story called 'humiliated'? It's fucking hilarious how wound up people get from reading a story they chose to read.

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by Sub_Hubbie06/06/12

Loved it

Great story. Loved the humiliation.

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by wifespantyboy10/03/12

Thank You

Thank you for taking the time and effort to write such an exciting and humiliating story. I enjoyed it and hope to find more stories you may have written along the same lines.
I agree with a previous comment dealing with all the negative comments. If you don't like this type of story why take the time to read them? Does it make you feel better to belittle others efforts and tastes? And then not have the courage to use an ID and hide behind Anonymous post.
To the author thank you again for taking the time to write and post this story.

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by yourstouse111/05/12

WOW!!!

Loved the humiliation. Keep up the hot stories. I can relate and remember

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by EgoTrixi11/18/12

No need to comment

All these wimps that enjoyed your story have saif enough. Men won´t like this story...but these wimpy cuckolds obviously did.

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by Pdrink201212/30/12

What an amazing story!

This is one of the best hulimation stories ever written

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by cuckwanabee03/12/13

Hot Story

You captured the conflicted feelings of guys who crave this humiliation, but who love their wives and don't want to lose their respect. A high risk deal. This would have been better if his wife hadn't taken it so far and had really done it because she cared for her husband, but then started to feel her own conflicts because she really got turned on by the sex.

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by Anonymous04/02/13

Time to go

But first, make sure all your so-called friends wives and girlfriends know what they're doing. Then, get your ducks in a row with the banks, credit cards, etc., quit your job so there's nothing there for her and plan where you want to move. It's a big country with lots of nice places. And as long as they're away from your soon-to-be ex-wife, then it's all good. With her demonstrated lack of love and respect for you, why would you stay with her one second longer than necessary?

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