All Comments on 'Drew's First Time'

This story builds perfect erotic tension. Its timing and content are perfectly balanced. It is one of the best I have seen on this site. Can't wait for another installment.

Oh my! Grinding thighs and pussies! I can't wait for a sequel between Drew and Mrs. Stengal! Maybe by Chap.3 they will include Marcie in a threesome?

Mmmm... your story is as steamy and sexy as it gets. I'd have to agree with those who'd like to see Marcie, Drew and her mother together in a wild threesome. At any rate, please continue this lusty tale!

Your story was wonderful. It is very sexy and sensual. I am not usually intrigued by build-up, but your build-up was wonderful and the fact that Drew's first time was with Marcie and not Katey was sort of a surprise. Very good writing.

Pelios:

I always enjoy your work. You've got a way of combining the down-to-earth with a real sense of the erotic. This one was really outstanding. I love it when a scene has both a kinky element and an element of honesty.

I hope you're able to put together a "Part 2".

Thanks~!

Great Job cant wait to hear the rest of the story with the "hot mom".. Somehow you took a re-cycled story and made it "great"!!!! Please keep writing.. Thanks..

and hopefully not the last. Looking forward to reading about Drew's weekend with Mrs. Stengal.

Pelios, you've done it again. Great work. After such a long break I was very pleased to see and read your latest masterpiece. Don't make us wait so long for the next chapter(s)of Drew's escapades.

Total realism and wonderful pleasure build-up throughout. Leaves me wanting more and more! Give us this heated passion once more with her mother..... soon.

made me wet. "Let ye among ... cast ... stone." In a day or two, after I mop up, you can publish the next chapter. (I think I now have a fever).

I have read this one three times. It is really well done. The thoughts and feelings that Drew expresses, of her journey from naivete to experience, are just wonderful.

A lovely story, good descriptions, and seeds for other adventures including mum/friend or even a mum daughter friend threesome?

Cant wait

Miranda

Very well written!! Cant wait to read more....

I just found your stories and I have been reading one almost every night! SO REAL! I think I've fallen in love with about half the girls you wrote about. Thank you.

I'm going to be so sad when I run out of them, please write more soon!

That story was so hot that I'm wet again!!! I had just gotten finished having sex with my wife (I'm a lesbian) when I decided to read some more stories. Now I'm going to have to ask her for another go-around to recuperate from this story. Wonderful! Let's have some more!

Kudos Pelios, I haven't read such a well written and wonderfully described story on here for a long time. After reading yours, I felt my stories were lacking, because of course I'm a man, and will never be able to experience the joy of sapphic love like you. I am definitely waiting for the next chapter and find out about Katey and Marcie and Drew. Lance

This is the stuff of a girl's dreams! What an incredibly sexy true story!

I thank both of you for sharing this.

I'm not lesbian but I have always wanted to rub my clit aginst another girls clit I find it to be the biggest turn on

XD I swear, this is one of the most hilariously erotic stories I've ever read. *giggle* 'Asleep Fantasy'-- huh, sounds interesting, and the detail you go through in it is just great. Also, Drew's character is just so cute, as is Marcie's mom. XD

I really enjoyed that story..great dialogue and erotic scenes..I'm just a huge fan of pussy-on-pussy.

Oh God, please continue this. This story has me extremely aroused, reminding me of something similar that happened to me. I would very much like to know what happens next. :o)

I am a guy, but I find f on f sex very exciting. Your writing was very controlled and realistic, and you write cleverly with good grammar - no misspellings which (sad of me) sometimes distracts me and spoils my enjoyment. I thought the tale was very believable and erotic - made me hard anyway! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Are you F?

just beautiful

Sweet young exploration. This was sexy.