by hotstuffinNH
Spelling and grammar please. There are lots of people here that will proof read for you.
Or at least use spellcheck. I realize this isn't a professional writer's site, but when you include words like "niplles" I just cringe. And this story really should be in lesbian. Just awful.
"By now each of them had at least 15 drinks each" Seriously? What exactly were they drinking?!
Spelling spelling spelling grammar grammar grammar not much of a story here. A husband and wife take her female boss to dinner, then home for all night sex. Pretty boring stuff.
Can we all say serious drinking problem. Never mind the numerous spelling and grammar errors, these 2 gals are raving alcoholics. Horrible story.