All Comments on 'Three Hot Days'

While those caning and spanking stories aren't my premier choice this on was extremely well written and nice to read. 5/5

I am posting anonymously but that only makes me a lurking lauder. I enjoy much of your work, finding it highly

erotic although far too intense for anything I could endure, even when I was much younger. But that is the vicarious thrill. The resulting sex is electrifying, reading and imagining. Thanks for your writing. Hope to read

more from you as the mood strikes you.

I've never been a fan of corporal punishment but this tale was so well done that I completely understood the emotional needs for both the giver and taker. As usual I love your happy endings. The only difference for me from your other stories was I didn't vicariously become one of the characters. I was a voyeur to the story. Thanks!

You laid out so many conditions to reviewing your story that I’m quite sure that you will delete these comments as you appear to only want praise rather than criticism.

Firstly, the story is well written with decent spelling and grammar.

Secondly, the storyline is disturbing and unpleasant.

Finally, I’m really trying be fair, however, the main characters would benefit from therapy. For anyone to suggest that they genuinely love another but inflict such pain, coldly, deliberately and with such

malice and obvious sexual enjoyment is perverted and not erotic.

This will doubtless go unpublished, however, I feel that writers who will only accept sycophantic feedback, should occasionally receive genuine critique.

Thank you for your politely put feedback. I have no intention of deleting it. If you take the time to read my other feedback you will see I normally leave negative comments posted. They are only removed when they are both RUDE and anonymous