All Comments on 'PtB Ch. 01 - Imbalance'

Second chapter when?

10 out of 5. Love it, love it, love it.

I'm a big fan of the Dune books and this is a very good alternative version of the original.

Hard to tell. I'm a noob writer and pretty slow. I hope to finish the next chapter before the end of the year.

Looking forward to more of this story. Liked the original Dune (book) series. Frank Herbert's son did well, but didn't quite get the feel of his father's style.

Amazing. Great take on the idea of Dune!! Looking forward to more!!!

This is absolutely brilliant. One of my favourite stories on the site. Truly. Please write some more chapters. The scene with the reverend mother was amazing. Again, please write some more. Thank you!

Nice work! Loved the gom jabbar scene - I was wondering how you would handle that. Thank you for writing this.