by welshman
Huh??? So many fancy words. Takes away from the story unless it was written for college professors!!! Need to lower your "impressive vocabulary" so the target audiance can understand it. Remember, its a porn site. Good story but because of the fancy high class words it will become boring very quickly.
I love the concept as well as the story.
I so enjoy a woman who takes the nonchalant, casual, indifferent approach to exhibitionism. The blatant, in your face variety of showing is not to my liking.
“Oh, were my legs just little too open?” “Oh my, how did that button get open?”
It is a shame that you have not written any new stories lately.