by ShelbyDawn57
That was an awesome read!!! Very, very well done ShelbyDawn57. I will look into more of your work, as this one was close to perfect!!
Loved it, length was perfect, sex was good and it had some heart. I will def be looking for more of your stories.
Always good stuff from you, though sometimes a little too deep for a quick jerk stop, but hey, that's just me. You go girl!
Cute story! It felt a little rushed at the end and wasnt super clear how grace came to be but I enjoyed it overall!
Probably the best i have read here. Well thought out, paced, nothing overboard and not in the land of fairy tales where everything is always perfect. Can't wait for more!.
Shelby,
This is a great story, ending was a bit fast but overall I loved the story.
Wish I had a sister to assist me with my journey I want more than B cups though.
I loved this story. I found myself wishing I was Andy(i). Later I hoped I could find an Andi for myself. It isn't likely as I'm a 66 yr. old but if it happens...
I love it
If course I love it, it's a Shelby story, and this are always amazing.
But this is so great. Really hot and sexy. I love brother/sister incest stories too, so this was a perfect combo.
Thank you!
@ShelbyDawn,
As usual, this story of yours made me cry… tears of joy, that is. Happily ever after is definitely okay with me. 🥰
Wonderfully written. Characters so alive. Story so realistic. I enjoyed every word.
With tears in my eyes, I loved this story. I have read so many of your stories, this may be my NEW fave. Idk, you have so many great reads.
Comfort zone be hanged, you challenged yourself and came out with this beauty. So nicely done.
@ShelbyDawn57, I fell in love with your story and I would love to be like Andi/Andy, have a sister like Emily and meet a boy like Rick who gave Andi/Andi sincere love. You wonderfully described the path to love that Andi/Andy had to go through and have the wonderful support of his sister Emily and then his parents. @ShelbyDawn57 I can't find words, my thoughts are swirling like crazy, but all I can say is: Thank you! for a beautiful story/short story. 🧒🏻♀️👧🏻❤️👩🏻💑🤵♂️👣🏡.
ps. Sorry for any mistakes and linguistic inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.
SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖👩🏻🦳♀️❤️🧒🏻🍦🧑🏻.
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@ShelbyDawn57, zakochałam/em się w Twojej historii i sama bardzo chciał/a bym być jak Andi/Andy, mieć taką siostrę jaką jest Emily oraz poznać takiego chłopaka jak Rick który obdarzył Andi/Andiego szczerą miłością. Wspaniale opisałaś drogę do miłości jaką musiał/a przejść Andi/Andy i mieć wspaniałe wsparcie swojej siostry Emily a następnie swoich rodziców. @ShelbyDawn57 nie umiem znaleźć słów, wirują Mi myśli jak szalone a jedynie mogę powiedzieć: Dziękuję! za przepiękną historię/opowiadanie. 🧒🏻♀️👧🏻❤️👩🏻💑🤵♂️👣🏡.
ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.
SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📖👩🏻🦳♀️❤️🧒🏻🍦🧑🏻.
I think this may be your best work. You are one of the few authors I'll read just because you wrote it and I believe your mis of sex and romance in this work was top notch.
This story is one of the best I've read in a long time. The timing, the writing, the movement forward were all so well done. Thank you so very much for sharing it on this website.
Such a loving, lovely story. I was invested in the characters and their development. I think something at the end may have gotten lost in the editing because the Joseph bit got skipped over, but the story was effectively done by then. Thanks for this!!
Once again I have enjoyed one of your stories. I know I am getting to soft in my older years as it brings tears of joy to my tired eyes. Thank you so very much.
Its a great story, very well written, the story line keeps flowing smoothly, just like your others. Waiting for more! Thank you Shelby!
A simple tale, really well crafted, with true to live narration. Plus, best of all, a truly happy ending. Thanks for sharing, Penny x
Beautifully written. In particular how the Joseph backdrop is set out in a few lines, beginning just with the dropping of his name, but without losing any of its power. (And for what it’s worth, much like Tolstoy offered up sketches in his “novella” Hadji Murat.)