by JosephMama
Nicely written. Probably it would make for better sex if we could experience the actual feelings of the opposite sex. A longer story might have included the husband going off to the wife's job, getting hit on by all her fellow workers, and finding out that she is the office pincushion.
and original, I would love to this situation repeated and devolped over 24 hours or so!
Great premise, and a nice start, but WAY too short. Need to learn how to develop a story more and explore the possibilities more. Not just "Oh wow, that's hot, let's fuck."
This story reminds me of the Star Trek series where theCapt.Kirk and a woman doctor had switched bodies your story was so well written i hope you continue to see how they get through the transformation or if they decide to change back he can go into the womens bathroom and see them and flirt with them as he is inside a womans body.lol
Pat
Nice plot and story line. I enjoyed it. Good to see us from our partner's perspective.
PW
This is an interesting theme - and for those who like their stories a bit more complicated go to Ann Douglas' "Through the Looking Glass Darkly"
It is longer and considerably darker, with a great twist at the end. It is the best body-switching story I've read EVER, ANYWHERE
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Body switching never turned me on but deserves thumbs up for originality (at least here).
develop it. what happens next? he goes to her work and the guys hit on her. normally, he'd be pissed but his new body likes it. he can't help it....the guy part of him likes the attention and wants to tease her coworkers.
I was just starting to feel aroused when... opps it finished. Please re-write it to include all new sexual situations for both!
Really enjoyed your story, a little anticlimactic but still very enjoyable
Wow! Very sexy!! Every married couples dream............very exciting fantasy!! Thx
Given this situation, doing a flash, one episode tale is either lazy or remarkably non-creative! Each partner can finally be totally open about the weirdest fantasies they would normally be afraid to admit to even mentioning! It will make ‘her’ being credible in a law office difficult, however. Maybe it is only an nighttime thing!
It's a pity that he couldn't stay in his wife's body for at least a couple of days. He could go to work instead of her and find out which of her male colleagues is too friendly with her. Which of the employees immediately grabs her ass instead of greeting her, and which of the bosses immediately unzips his fly, entering her office.