All Comments on 'The Chinese Tattoo Pt. 01'

Nice story wait for more

Awesome start can't wait to read more

Tremendous story line. Can't barely hardly wait for many more chapters! Wish it were illustrated!

Can't wait for more of this and of Emma-chan

More, please!

Great story! Hope we can see more of Mei!

Love it! Hope we get a threesome with Sam.

Too easy. I know a lot of people will disagree, but you didn't leave much room for a good conflict. These dream come true mind control stories are a trap. Usually they just lead to a fuck fest that has no story because the needed conflict for a story isn't possible. If you can wrangle a problem for Brian to solve out of this I'll be impressed.

This was perfect

You should follow-up with Mei. it seems like the next step and he could Program Vivian to be only his and any others he takes a fancy too. like Sam?

Hope this story continues. Great first chapter!