All Comments on 'Mommy and Her Twins Need Treatment'

Great story. Keep them coming.

The story is quite lame, the wording is verbose, but there were some good parts in it. It should have included a little more ideas and fewer porn clichés.

I liked the bed scene on page 4 and the phone call on page 5. The rest of it... well... :)

over the top and ridiculous, but very hot and fun to read. can't wait to see what you write next

oh dear god

Dude, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Please keep writing! You touched on every single one of my favorite themes in stories. I'm really looking forward to any/all of your future stories! If you need assistance with editting, I'd be happy to assist. Keep up the good works.

Seems like you got a lot of inspiration from my stories... and I love it! Keep it coming!

more lencery please

Good story but just a little bit out there. Unless I missed it, I don't remember any mention of birth control. What with all of the continuous rutting & cum loading, somebody should be knocked up by now. Fantasy is one thing but nobody can have that kind of stamina. 4☆

Hot, physically impossible, the entire family would have died of dehydration and starvation, but as fantasies go it was a fun read.

This is absurd. Please morę

Part 2 should include tales of Sam building a harem for Jacob of hypersexual nymphs and all 3 women becoming pregnant!!

Thank you for all the comments! I never expected to get so many responses.

Yes, the story is absurd and over-the-top; that was the idea. I now realize I should've included an explicit warning, since not everyone is familiar with the author I was inspired by (hi btw ;)). In the future, I'll make sure to always put a note to the reader.

Even so, I like to think that it could be possible. With Dr Bowman to take care of them and serve them meal-replacement shakes (think Soylent), the family probably wouldn't starve or dehydrate. Physical wear-and-tear would be a bigger problem, I think, but the doctor says their condition goes beyond just the insane sex drive. Perhaps there are some improbable genetics involved, that enable Jacob to stay hard without ill effects, and the women to never get tender and raw? Far-fetched to be sure, but maybe not outright impossible.

Whether or not it would be a fulfilling life, I'll leave that for you to decide...

You know what your doing keep going.!!!! I was going to say sounded like tacocarnitas.. Who should also write more

Hermosa hisotria, espero que tenga mas de 20 partes, segui asi, MAS LENCERIA por favor

Excellent story please keep writing.

Wow, I am winded. Have calluses on my palms. If continued, have to bring in classmates and friends, of both the kids, Mom, and Sam. Maybe Dr. Sam should try some writing, conferences or other medical activity to study "the problem".

A little closer proofing is my only suggestion.

me imagino las tentas de la madre como las de ava addams y las de la hermana como las de payton presley, si?

It was great till page 3 where you revealed the mother might be the biggest whore on this site. 1/5

So how big is Jacob exactly? My engineer brain needs a number. XD

Utterly ridiculous but very hot.

My only problem is that you skipped important moments like the first time the family came home and how they started having sex with each over or the first time Samantha got fucked.

Really far-fetched, but for me a dream life, making love constantly to the woman you love and physically desire 24/7. Il love this endless sex story, more detailed anal and pregnancy please. Keep going.

I loved the concept of the story an d for the most part it's execution. However, I found it repetitive tothe point I started skipping para graphs.

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

What a life, some good sex in this one

hahaha, 5/5!

He should have knocked at least one of them up.

This story had to have been written by a 12 year old. It was almost funny; the characters are so dumb, it could have been a parody of porn writing.

You keep using “petite.” I do not think it means what you think it means