All Comments on 'Making Love'

Your first erotic poem?

You parlayed your non-erotic skills very well!

Graphic, sensuous, immersive, compelling, enticing, arousing, erotic, and

Orgasmic!

Delightful…..greatly enjoyed the increasing pace and “volume”……5 stars

Omg thank you guys for your feedback! This is my first erotic poem and I'm so glad you all liked it. I'll keep writing more and fine tune my skills. Thanks again! <3 <3 <3

Ahahaha! Let me get some "inspiration" first ;)

I've read this a couple of times now because you're such a good writer ;)

That is such sexy and erotic read and yet so well composed. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing after that.

Round two please :)

Wow, I am touched that you all want more! I wasn't really planning on writing a second part to this because I figured the reader would want to fill in the blanks for their own pleasure. But if you guys really want to read more from this, I will gladly write it out! Stay tuned! (^_^) xxx

Whew! That is some serious heat right there. I love all that slapping.

Mmmmm Love it