by NomdePlumer
Interesting premise.
Sex was too short and too fast.
Story lacks TAGS. A negative.
Four stars.
Clever premise.
But pretty much all back story.
Sure could have used more manual exploring of each other.
Her tits. Her nipples. Determining what she liked.
His cock. His balls. Perhaps some mutual 'tasting'.
Three stars.
Pretty freaking hot. And it felt fast, but semi-plausible at the same time. I'm very hot read