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All Comments on 'Don't Fuck [With] the Occult'

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AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

So fun and well paced, I loved it!

GateWraithGateWraith9 days ago

I loved the story itself but I'm not giving it a rating because it is in need of a rewrite. The random jumps between present and past tense made it seem as if you couldn't decide what style to write in. Novice writers (myself included) should stick to past tense. Present tense is trickier and best saved for more experienced authors.

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Intermittently wrote queer erotic fanfics for a few years. Deciding to try my hand in writing erotica in general. I post my works both here and my NSFW account on Reddit as u/Red-Silk-Sheets. They range from prompt responses to original works. However! What I will have on Redd...