All Comments on 'Whoremom Pt. 01'

hope you can do another with this one?

I’m guessing her other son is going to get involved but I’d like Marty to get her all to himself. Glad there’s more coming to this story

That was hot! Love some more

Great read! Don't let them stop now. He still has to plant his seed in Mommy's garden, ass & mouth without the cake & sober for her submission to be complete. I do hope he still respects & loves Mommy enough not to pimp or whore her out to the general public or all of his friends. Keep her to himself & don't disrespect her while dominating if possible. Make it a loving disrespect. I can see many fun chapters to cum. 5/5

Please just the two of them.

3 rating for no PUSSY HAIR! Seriously, this is a mom story!!!!

Great story! I hope there will be more about this whoremom!

Can’t wait to read additional chapters!

This really does not sound like a true or realistic mom story; not at all!

For example,

"As he spread his mother's thighs and then her plump pussy lips he caught sight of her labial folds glistening under the low light of the lounge. Marianne tensed up at the sheer exhilaration of knowing her son was about to lick her in the place he first came from.

She closed her eyes and waited for that forbidden feeling. He teased her even more by kissing the tops of her legs, the hems of her thigh-highs, then finally ran his tongue over the soft, pink folds of her labia." Then,

"She did as she was told, slipping off the sofa onto her knees and getting into position so that she had her arms propped up on the sofa and her BARE ASS and PUSSY waiting for attention."

What mom has a shaved pussy? I mean SERIOUSLY, what were you thinking! Oh wait. I see, you have only written 6 prior stories. That's it, you just don't know any better yet! Read a few mom stories first, and then write for the audience that reads those stories. Mature ladies' "MOM'S" have hairy mounds. Full bush!

5 stars. would have given it 10 stars if I could.

Great story! Don't let the anonymous lil bitches critique your work, just because you didn't have a hairy pussied mom. This story has great potential and so many directions it could go. I can not' wait to read more!

My wife and I loved the story. We took turns orally satisfying one another as we read your story outloud. Her orgasm was incredible.

Ignore the critics, you're just getting started. I look forward to more of your work.

MORE LENCERTY, FREE USE MOM, TANKS

Completely agree with the hairless pussy on a mom story. What lady in her dammed 40's shaves her cunt every day just in case she gets to fuck her own son that day. Does not happen, is not realistic like the commenter said. If you want to write shaved stories, do teen girls at the beach or the pool where groin pimples and stubble is often visible in bikini lines. But MOM's, mature women, they know better than that stuff. Additionally, incest is most often completely unplanned; that is unless it has been going on for some time. So, ladies are usually not shaved at any age because as stated, incest is often unplanned. I rated it a 3 for effort almost a four. keep at it and consider the comment about a hairless mom. It most definitely negatively impacted your rating from myself. Stubble, and ingrown hair pimples on a 40-year-old woman, BS! Also, another commenter pointed out there are multiple ways / directions this story can go, see if it can go down a hairy road!

Pretty hot story!

Feels like a part 2 of the day after is needed. Great job.

Who said that she had a hairless pussy? I love hairy pussy! I want a hairy pussy. Shaved pussy is not natural.

Yikes. The story first. No thanks. Hairy pussy fetish fuckup doesn't know it's a fetish. Wow. A lot of girls groom. Mom's too. Same people dumbfuck.

Don't mind the rude and childishly entitled comments. Good story. Could use some editing though. Mistakes like using 'he' when it should be 'she' and vice versa can be a little jarring.

Please ignore the negative comments. We’re here to get ourselves off, and you have me well on my way.

I cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapter keep up the good work

very nice

Really fucking naughty and NICE!!

Dislike only because of the title and further reference to his mother aw a WHORE. She wasn't and never had been. She got accidently stoned on shit that her asshole son made. The same asshole son who labeled her a "Whoremom"

Not cute or funny............