by winterwhereof
Always ends way to soon. However, quality is still very high. Keep up the good work.
I finally got caught up. This is my favorite story on the site, by far!
I like how there's not too many characters, and they each have distinct personalities. It's easy to remember who everyone is. Some other group-sex stories get overwhelming.
My favorite sex scenes have involved the portal panties. Delta using Zoey's cock on other girls, and Rosie walking around with it inside her, we really creative and hot! Things that are only possible in a magical world like this. The more mundane sex scenes, while well-written, don't inspire quite as much excitement due to their familiar nature.
Going forward, I'm honestly looking forward to some of the larger-scale stuff, especially a religion forming around Zoey. I'd love to see what a shrine or temple to her looks like, and how her priestesses would interact with the populace.
While I'm not caught up, I wanted to write a comment to say that this is my favorite erotica and I really hope you never ever stop.
Catching up on stories as good as this is always so painful lol, and this is a *great* story. Really fun, really distinct characters, maybe the best written tsundere ive encountered and *extremely* sexy magic sex.
Even past all the sexy stuff, i like the setting, its interesting and generally well thought out, it's given a level of care authors who are this good at writing sex often don't have to spare. Extremely good shit hope you can finish it