All Comments on 'Photographed by my Friend: Pt. 01'

Even though it's a long story, it feels unfinished. Everyone knows Bert and Amanda are going to get it on, and Bert is going to record all the action on his camera. How could you just stop? Shame on you. Five stars anyway, because I thoroughly enjoyed your well-written story.

Maybe even Amanda will learn half the men of Germany have seen the pictures, yes, even the most risqué ones, and in an impulsive act of anger she invites Bert over to take some "selfies" of herself getting fucked: first with a dildo and then with Bert. Anyway, great job, both of you! ~~JB Edwards

Really well written. I hope the second part comes fast

Well written. Great build up and pacing. I liked it up until it was clear Bert is manipulating Amanda and then she blames herself for everything. That kind of thinking is so poisonous. I realize this is just fantasy writing and fantasies can go to areas we wouldn’t necessarily go in real life, but that kind of behavior is so pervasive in actual relationships that I stopped enjoying the story.

This was a fun read. It had elements of "Sister's Home Movies," another story here that I enjoyed but different enough to be enjoyed separately. I thought the ending of her kicking Bert out was solid and believable, even if she does end up calling him back for more later. The pace was awesome and the scenes easy to visualize. 5 stars.

It was nice, seeing them fall is delicious. I can appreciate the ending showing the probable future while leaving the reader to think of the next step, but I do hope the writer does come with their own idea of what happens next.

Looking forward to more of their story. Nice job on this.