All Comments on 'Guardian Program Ch. 20'

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Teacher44Teacher4413 days ago

You have written yourself into a corner. To keep with Robert's character, Bill and Debra will be dead. Toni will be crushed, which will lead to even more darnkess for Robert. Finding Samantha will not be enough to keep him from sliding further into the deep end. I wish this story had not taken the turn it did.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit12 days ago

What a bunch of manipulators! Bill is a prick and Debra isn’t any better. Robert ought to just seal them in their house, indefinitely. The bigger question is: how much did Robert manipulate the three of them? Jessie remains on the back burner, Robert certainly has blind spots about her.

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