All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 114'

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There are other authors and stories I enjoy, but nothing makes me smile more than to see a new chapter from you. After this brilliant chapter, shall be dreaming up creative ways to shamelessly encourage you to keep writing for us! ;).

Cyrus lives! I loved every bit of the interaction between him and Mike, and his reaction to mikes invitation. I’m still kinda worried cause far as I know he hasn’t gotten any medical attention from Zel, but choosing to believe he will recover.

Knowing that bitch witch Elizabeth is dead makes me happy, tho I’d have preferred Jenny to have killed her. Now where is Sarah? Hmmm…. Even tho Jenny didn’t get her own body, she made it home safe to her doll and cuddles from Grace (fucking hell *snort*) and Callisto is safe so yay!

Next chapter will be epic as the battle begins. I kinda hope Frankie gets eaten alive…sloooowly…by his own skeletons. But I’ll take any death for that asshat.

I care much more for plot than sex scenes, but I did start reading Literotica for a reason eh? Most sex scenes just kinda bore me now, but this one? Whew! Oh to be one of that crowd! S’funny, every time the fairies cheer, I can see and hear them. Love the horny lil pests! And Que’s entrance at the end was hilarious.

A good time was had by me! Thx soooo much :)))

Every time you post Annabelle it makes my day, this story is so frikkin awesome.

Perhaps one day Jenny can get a body, unless she likes being a ghost.

Anyway keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing the frenchy getting smoked..

Your writing and this story is awesome Anabelle, it always makes me happy when you post.

I will look forward to seeing the frenchy get smoked, and perhaps one day Jenny will get a body again. Unless she likes being the cool ghost.

Congratulations on 150 posts. That is an amazing amount of writing full of imagination and incredible characters. A most profound thank you for sharing your talent here. I always look forward to reading your next chapter

Never apologize/complain about one of your chapters being longer. For me, a long story is ALWAYS better. Unless it's Radley bitten. I mean, badly written. (Sorry, I couldn't resist.) When you're blessed/cursed as I am to read fast, short stories are a pita (pain in the ass). [750 words take me literally 90 seconds to read, and are largely a waste of those 90 seconds.] 8-10 Lit pages are good, upwards of 20 are better, because it takes me longer to read them. One of Snekguy's stories was like 53 Lit pages; it took me 2 shifts at work to read. It was great.

The best part of this chapter was, imo, when Death was on his way: "I shall see you in the morning," he shouted. "Bright and early! No, not you, young man, I was talking to...no, I'm not coming personally to collect everybody, that would be... Can someone please help him? He's crying now." Even now I'm still chuckling. I await as patiently as I can for chapter 115.

damn your work has only gotten better.

Congratulations on reaching 150, and yes I’ve read or rather devoured every word. You are a prodigious talent and thanks for sharing. May HFHM continue, just glad to share the experience - thank you.

I am used to 30k words in one chapter.

I love your work. So, don't limit a chapter based on words. If it requires more words, go for by all means.

BTW Loved the orgy scene. I wished it to have been longer..😌

WOW, when a new chapter pops up on my screen I have to just stop doing anything else to read it. Can't wait for 115 and 116. I've followed you from the first writings, thanks so much.

You write wonderful stories!!!! Perhaps you could end Book 7 with a restorative orgy starring all the “Monsters” I think they’ll all need it. I also think that Cyrus & Eulalie need to have a conversation about him hunting her Mother with apologies from Cyrus to both Arachnes (her & her niece)

Need more Tink!!!

Love it all as always. I honestly think your the only author with over 100 submissions, that I read regularly, that has never produced something I didn't enjoy. Even at 150 entries your still batting 1000, and I don't see that changing any time soon. No matter how hydrated I stay, I'm always thirsty for more from you. Thanks for Sharing, and hope for many more Books not just chapters. P.S. As I said in my opening we need more Tink, She will always be my favorite and she's been in the background for awhile, I miss her and the brief glimpse we got of her here, just made it all the more obvious that we need more of her.

Fantastic chapter. Especially loved Quetzalli’s horny marathon. That was a good bit.

That was another great read. You always amaze me with your talents. I look forward to the next instalment.

Another amazing chapter. Extremely well written. I love the tags as always but I am always amazed how you make a different lead in to the title every time.

I love the actual story of this so much that I basically stopped caring about the sex scenes, but wow did this chapter deliver on both!!! I'd give 20 stars if I could!

I started reading literotica for the sex, but found my preferred authors for their plots. Sadly many of those authors sex scenes grew stale and repetitive, but your scenes have stayed fresh and imaginative right along with your captivating plots.

Best of all though, I think, are your characters. I love your characters. This does bring up the maddening task of picking out which is my favourite. There's sassy raunchy Lily, or creepy funny Jenny, or naive yet deep and worldly Death, or the kick ass senior citizen Master Cyrus, or ... I could go on and on but you get the point.

I just want to say that I love your stories, they make this trying world a better place, and thank you for sharing them.

150 for 150, that streak has got to be a record! So grateful to live in the time that this masterpiece is unfolding <3

As always a great story. I hope all is well with.

Your story like any great story teller transports me to other world, where I laugh at times and envious at others.

I have a permanent page open just for you and your next chapter. Would to have this book in print for my library. As always well done.

What can I say.

I just love it.

Love the storylines

The plots

Most characters

The humor

Thank u again.

Cheers, Marc

The only thing wrong with this chapter is Tink didn't get husband time and those tears down her face, even though they were of relief.

Need Cyprus to get a healing hug from Naia or for Zel to get out of her ass and come heal the man who protected her child.

That Jenny and Cyprus moment? Priceless

BEST COMMENT SECTION IN THE WORLD!!!!!!! I love you guys.

Poor Tink was left out. I hope Mike makes it up to her. Once again a great chapter and a cliffhanger ending.

Totally worth it. I snuck in some me time at work to finish reading it. Just don’t tell the boss.

Another awesome chapter. Ty ABH!

Can't wait for more positively amazing writing.

It's much nicer then what the Demoncrats are unleashing on America.

Wait. The locket Mike pocketed? Could it help Jen get trasfered into a body and become mortal? Then she can join orgies

Thank You so much Annabelle for the years you have put into this Very Enjoyable Masterpiece! It has been so great to experiance the Love, Lust and Humor of the Radley Family with you. You are a wonderful writer and have a sick twisted sence of humor that I really appreciate alot! Please keep up the Great work? And thank you again.

Oh and by the way, Tink is going to be so pissed-off about missing out on the orgy.🤣

You are a national treasure.

I started this series about two weeks ago and finally caught up.

Holy shit. What a ride!

I really didn’t know that I needed this in my life and I’m now sort of sad that I can’t continue to binge it. Instead, I’ll have to practice patience like everyone else.

If I can make any suggestion, it would be to consider Mongolia as a location for one of Mike’s properties. I think it provides a fascinating historical backdrop and isn’t too closely related with any of the existing cast.

Thanks again for your YEARS of work!

The one thing that stays up longer than Mike is how consistently awesome your writing is.

Damn. I get all giddy when I see a new chapter out. Your work has gotten better the longer you go. Don’t let word counts limit your story, if it needs more go with it. The way you end each chapter and leave us hanging on the edge of the cliff wanting more is a natural talent and a gift. Please keep these chapters coming. LOVE the stories

Yay! Cyrus lives and gets to come to Mike's house.

I'm guessing the Curator will not be amused with Elizabeth and Sarahs failure.

Can't wait to see what Tink has in store for The Captain. Almost wish Jenny was there to really mess with him but I think in this case it needs to be like Bugs Bunny. short, brutal and absolutely hilarious.

I hope Kisa gets to dance with everyone. Maybe Pele will teach her some moves.

So I guess the sixty four million dollar question is who is the Tink special bullet for? The Captain or the Krakken.

Also an Order representative from Europe is trying to horn in. Could it be...

Another awesome chapter!

While the overall story was good, I hated the lesbian sex in the ending scene. Happy to see Beth and Mike FINALLY get together. That should've happened at least 50 chapters ago. Mike should be the ONLY PERSON Beth is fucking. Same goes for ALL OF THE OTHER WOMEN. Including Dana. Stop the lesbian CRAP! And make Beth Mike's woman ONLY! Until that happens, I'll continue as I always do and give you your 1*.

Wonderful story. Next papa Cyrus is going to teach Grace magic.

Congratulations on 150 stories. Here's to another 150 at least. You are my favorite author on lit.

Congratulations on your 150th work! I baked for the occasion (and because someone mentioned the snacks ran out at the last meeting). But Tina ate all the cookies, Lily licked the frosting off all the cupcakes, and Asterion’s refusing to share the baklava. Oh well, time to read this early gift of a chapter!

Every single chapter of yours that I read reminds me of how much I love these characters and your writing. I'm looking forward to see what happens next! Also, if there ever is a chapter where lily and Mike finally say I love you to each other, I think my life will be complete.

5 STARS!!!

No hesitation!

I'm only waiting for Tink to get her chance with Mike again. I know she gets plenty of him when he's home, and you don't want to keep typing up the naughtiness just between those two, but I feel like her and Cecelia (I hope I spelled it right) are due for some action again.

Another excellent chapter. I admire how you keep them coming, keep them fresh, keep them entertaining. Have noted my calendar when 115 will be published.

Thanks so much, fully addicted to this story and these wacky sex crazed characters!

I love that this family just keeps growing. Just the perfect way to offer Cyrus an invitation. We have comfy chairs. Mike's magic being this growing anomaly is so interesting. Living magic. Guess that's what happens when you've swapped soul pieces with just about all the mythology. I do wonder what the merfolk bit will give him. The geoup scene was interesting. The dynamics at play. Hear for the growing world though, and you keep delivering. Thank you.

Dear Annabelle

I start writing this comment when there is already 12 to the chapter and yet anonimous commenters between @Lissome_Lapine and @Wash2015 and first half of @Fuzzy_Kbear's comment resume most all I want to say. @FirstClassFlirt's paragraphs 2 and 3 add up but I think she/he didn't get the hints about Cyrus state. Death got the hint on Mike's answer to his/her question. I love this litterary trick to delay what hapend with Cyrus.

Abella, Kisha and Tink are very reponsible not joining the party as Quetzaly does, they deserve extra fun in the future as the ones at the house.

You are the best.

I got it. I don’t accept it. :p. It’s a fictional story with lots of magic. Anything is possible. And I’m a she.

Loved it (as always :) )

For me longer chapters are great as we get more of your amazing writting!!

As always - many thanks for sharing and entertaining us all.

Thanks for the journey with you and your story.

I have been here since the beginning 😃

Epic! Congrats on 150 and thanks again for sharing this wonderful world (and your wonderful talent) with us!

Wow! Annabelle, you thrill me with the action, and then turn things around by making me laugh out loud; your writing is an amazing roller coaster. I thoroughly enjoyed the orgy at the end. As we have seen with the ladies before, sometimes a good exchange of life-force is all it takes to revive someone, and you sure had the gang exchanging. The way you kept the all in character during the sex was wizardry. You know your characters, and they work so well together. I can think of more superlatives to go with the five stars, but my head is still reeling from the conclusion of the one battle and the orgiastic preparation for the next. Keep up the great work!

this is the first time I have read the comments before leaving mine ... the vast majority so positive with a standout that in reply is just skip the bits you don't like.

once again you have delivered a stand out chapter and I am thinking I will buy it when it is finished and in a hardback as I love reading books and I never thought I would say I am looking forward to a book with this much sex in it but it is not gratuitous or forced or after 150 works definitely not stale. Having said that it is the outstanding story line that is keeping me reading.

Yet another BRILLIANT chapter

Another awesome chapter in an amazing series of books. I love that you have Piers Anthony's recommendation as he's one of my favourite authors. I see that many people commenting here don't realize that Cyrus is dead. It's really quite clever the way that you wrote it. It reminded me somewhat of the movie Sixth Sense. Now he's going to haunt the living room in Mike Radley's house. A fitting end to an old grizzled mage who switched sides after decades of wrong thinking and he definitely achieved redemption for saving the kids. I can't wait for more! Peace and love.

So glad I'm around to enjoy your work. Congrats on 150 still wishing for a revisit to your first work, but happy to be along for the ride. Damn good writing.

Magical as always

Wow! Just fucking WOW!! I love ❤️ you Annabelle and this amazing assortment of characters you’ve created 💗💗💗 Take me I’m yours!

Those is such a perfect adult fantasy story.

A pre-battle orgy is fun and relevant, but also excellent tactical planning.

Team Radley is magically recharged, and Mike picks up merman powers for ocean combat.

Although I have been reading this from Chapter 1 ...

I seem to have forgotten how it was that Amir got dispersed ... A reminder of where to go to catch-up with my failing memory?

But with Elizabeth and Sarah being all but helpless against the dark forces they have had complete control over so far seems like a fitting consequence to their evil especially now that Jenny is back...

Love the story's so far cant wait to read the next instalment

Ok so when do we get the mike and Yuki soul swap? And are we gonna see mike big dick lily like he did in the Christmas chapters where he used his magic to make it bigger, And when is Ingrid getting it and maybe aurora?

Brilliant as always. Now I have caught up it's a shame I can't just carry on reading. Looking forward to the next part. Don't forget to enjoy yourself too x

Yes yes yes. Mine and Lily need more riverbed moments. She's just a little guy that needs live. Mike and Lily and Mike and Beth are OTP. Please, you beautiful bastard.

Thank you yet again Annabelle another awesome chapter. So glad that Cyrus has joined the family. x

Since binging the beginning over a year ago, I look forward to each chapter's release with delicious anticipation!

Fun, beautiful, soulful, and sexy... (Kinda like me)

Love the healthy polyfamily dynamics. I would love an orgy scene where everyone has a place in an ever-shifting puzzle, no one on the sidelines, everyone connected somehow. My version of heaven!

I am thoroughly enjoying the series thus far. That being said, I fully expect Mike to walk away from his showdown with Frankie by the skin of his teeth, something which he has habitually done throughout the series so far, and something I suspect he can not keep doing indefinitely. Mike needs more than allies, more than the monsters and their soul fragments, his magic, and a few lucky artifacts, he needs generals. More of what Mike did with Hestia and Kisa after the meeting with Frankie and Poseidon. He needs to start exploring the other properties, especially the castle in I think Scotland that has been mentioned a few times, and start establishing lines of communication with the other gods they hold. Bring both Artemis and Hestia in as advisors and possibly Titania in exchange for moving the Dragons to the Fae realm, the sooner he starts weaving a tapestry of all the assets available to him and stops just desperately pulling on threads when his back is against the wall the less likely his rubbing shoulders with the other game players is to get him killed. Oh! could we see more with Cecilia and Amymone at some point? Please and thank you!

Thank You again and always! ❤️😈❤️😈❤️😈❤️

Another great chapter to the series and I can't wait for more. Also started listening to the audio books.....OMG to actually hear these characters adds even more to the stories.

I get the idea Cyrus and Death may be a lot closer than before but Callisto did look at him so it could be he is still with us corporeally... great chapter!

Really, really concerned that Sara is now occupying Cyrus. And man, would that annoy me.

Wow, on many levels! I was working my way back through HFHM when I noticed the counter change from 149 to 150, so I jumped over to find out how things were going. First, congrats on the big 150! Second, thank you for sharing your imagination and your writing skills with us - you have an amazing ability to transport me (us) into the scenes/ situations you are creating and get me (us) emotionally invested in what is going on in your story.

I read through the other comments and am looking forward to finding out what Tink has planned for Francois (and/or the Kraken), what Cyrus’s place is in the household, whether Sarah survived, and… all of it!! Be well Miss Annabelle, I hope that you and yours are staying well and hydrated . Best, Ed

I absolutely loved Ratu's emotional growth and how Lily accepted and supported it in her own way.

First off, I am super h a ppy Cyrus got invited into the house, but I agree with someone else's comments on here that he may have died saving Grace and is only there in spirit which would explain Dana and Ratu not acknowledging him. Of course Mike, Death, and Jenny, and most likely Cecilia and Sullivan can also see him. I hope that means he will stick around for a while. Also, I am so happy that when Elizabeth tried to kill Jenny she failed. I also feel that Sarah is dead for real this time but we'll see.

Just when I thought I can’t love Lily more, she brings up phrasing. Happy the kids are home safe and, whatever his ultimate fate, Cyrus does have a last name now. Can’t wait to see what Tink has planned for Captain Douchebag and his undead crew. Also, we said tentacles and a man’s torso? Feels like an opportunity for…diplomacy.

You did it again! Can’t wait until next time…drinking water as I type. Eat fruit and be happy!

Love the fun with Beth and Mike!

I soooo enjoyed the extra pages this installment. Great transition from the battle royal last chapter and a good R&R before the coming invasion. Keep up the great work and I can not wait for the next installment. PS I am so glad Cyrus will be staying around, he had developed into a kind of old man of the clan and that stability will go far in helping the young ones become more stable in the future as well. (maybe even the young dragons?)

Amazing as always, I so love your work

Excellent chapter. When "Oracle" will join Radley house ? Did you planned anything for her ? Waiting for peace time with everyone at home.

death uncomfortably asking what to do with cyrus, dana and yuki not noticing him, jenny saying "you're just like me now"... guys i dont think cyrus is still alive

“Unnecessary Flash reference”

Snort!

Never in my life did I think I would get wrapped up in a story on here where I wanted to skip over the sex parts to see what happens.

So, what does Mike get outa his co-mingling with Leilani? Will he be able to morph into a mer-Mike? Will this talent also work in fresh water or limited to marine environments?

Will he have some kinda power over denizens of the deep? Maybe he'll be able to challenge Frenchie for control of the Kraken Kritter?

Like the Chipmunks used to sing "We can hardly stand the wait!" (Although, as a kid, I always thought they were saying "We can hardly stay awake!" Hey, chipmunks hibernate. That's what I thought!)

Thanks for sharing your creative efforts.

ps: given all the weirdness on Maui in real life, you're not just prepping us all for some kind of Big, Real Life, 'Big Reveal,' are you? I mean, you're not, like, some kind of real live Caretaker, are you? If you are... I know where you can find a retired librarian with 32.7 years experience. Oh, and his wife of 50 years was a librarian as well. I'm just saying... just in case... you know?

Yep agreed I think Cyrus is an ex parrot…

~Annabelle Hawthorne

Damn, You shure stuck the landing!

10 🌟 out of 5!!!

I loved this chapter Annabelle, so much happened, and I have a feeling its still going to get better. I am loving the way you are growing each of the characters, and that you've given Tink some of that attention now too, she is such a li'l dorlin' after all, sure she might be a tough cookie, but under all that crunchie shell, she's just a gooey hot mess like the rest of them 💗 That last scene with the ladies? That was 🔥 as hell SO sexy, I had to go and have a moment, thank you ☺️😋 Keep banging the rocks together, and I'll see you later for the next exciting installment 🫡

Hard before the storm? Enjoying the story, and the fun. I hope the spring replenishes you.

Have an excellent day!

FFS... I'm just not eloquent enough to give justice to your writing :) Every time the stories leave me so satisfied and so unsatisfied at the same time. Just sweet torture every time...

Now that was one hot steamy ending what a lucky man to have so many ladies willing to take care of him keep up the excellent writing

As always you’ve outdone urself! Can’t wait til think gets her own scene at the end of this for being the best wife for her husband

This is just great. Thank you.

Thankyou for another amazing installment!

...or at least, in a while. The victory over the sons of sin and Elizabeth was phenomenal, and I look forward to him fighting the Vampire and Amir again. Hopefully they can send Amor wherever they sent that Demon that they nuked with a Sun

I could read this for the rest of my life. As long as you keep writing, I'll eep reading.

DON'T EVER QUIT!!!

You are a master of the written word.

About damned time! You vex me woman. It only took 114 chapters for Beth to plant herself on Mike's root. I've been waiting, because in my mind since they are the only nominal humans, their child will be the next Caretaker. Oops spoiler? It's ok, I'm not that smart, so others reached that conclusion 100 chapters ago.

Yet again another amazing piece of literature. I'm not sure I could ever get tired of this story.

Every chapter in this series has been awesome and yes I started at the beginning many of the chapters More than astonishing but this one was by far the best one yet

Stupid Me failed to notice the previous chapter dropped. <sad> Lucky Me got to read two new chapters back to back! Most mages use a wand to cast magic, Mike kinda uses his in reverse... I am eager to find out what goodies he gains from the orgy. It is time for Francois to permanently french off!

Final thought: Much the same as Mike gains powers by swapping soul fragments, Annebelle, I think your writing prowess grows the more you write.

Dang it! I hate when I catch up to “Live”! Love your writing, Annabelle. Kudos on the Archer reference.

It has been enjoyable to read this series. I’m glad you finally remembered that it is supposed to be an erotic tale. Thank you. I am looking forward to the next installment.