All Comments on 'Rustle 3'

Enjoyed it ... was the guard Merrit or Emmit?

I enjoyed that, thanks for your talent and passion.

Another big time hit tale. Great work very well written

Dave

Excellent!

I love this tale. I especially love the happy ending - for everyone except those that deserved it!

This was a lot of fun and I'm sorry it's over. I think you left plenty of room for a sequel.

I agree with Aardie that was a fun story, great how you put it all together.

Thank you for this wonderful tale. I could read about these great characters forever! I was routing for the old witch to get more then her "tea" but you can't have everything I guess.

Brilliant

Great story, thanks!

I loved it. Unique premise and very well written

One of my new favorites. My only complaint is that it ended so quickly. Thank you for sharing.

[cliquegge] Merrit. I'll get that patched -- thanks!

I really enjoyed this story just like your others. The ending seemed a bit rushed though. I read back through but didn't see where we found out who was trying to kill Mara. Don't know if that was intentional but seems odd that they give up after the attempt at the Inn

An excellent story. Nice and refreshing to read one.

Another truly enjoyable series. Loved every syllable.

Very good story, having read only this chapter I am impressed with your story telling.

Always a bit sad to reach the end of your stories. It was great as always. Wonder if Rustle ever saw a dragon? lol That would have made the guards pee themselves. Maybe a future book will pick up with Stella and Erick's lives as they reach maturity with the adventures and troubles the two rambunctious former runts get themselves into?

I echo H2OWolf's comments. Love the story, will re-read it often; just wish the ending didn't seem rushed - some things seemed "glossed over" to ensure brevity.

I get it - this was not to be the second coming of "The Wheel of Time", but I felt that some details got lost in the rush to keep it at three chapters.

Still love your work, though. :)

Wonderful story! When does the movie come out? I would pay to watch this on the big screen.

Very nice story. Somewhere Merrit got changed to Emmit!

A quite enjoyable read. The end, to my joy, seems to leave open the possibility of continuation. I and, I'm certain, others would look forward to such.

Great story! Well worth reading.

Just a tiny critique: the scene where the brigand crapped his pants you wrote (not going to go find it to quote) something like 'was easy to find by listening to his heavy breathing and his soiled pants.' Unless the dude was still noisily filling his pants, perhaps it should be like 'and smelling his soiled pants'?

[dontyouwishyouknew] Thanks. The edit for the name-swap has been sitting out there so I patched this error and uploaded the repaired copy. These take a while to be reviewed. Tweaking it will drop me in the queue but we might as well get it patched now.

Loved your story please keep up the great work

Great storytelling; first two chapters were more carefully edited than the last, but still a wonderful story.

Thank you for the beautiful gift of this story