All Comments on 'My Two Mothers'

I would like to read more about these characters.

Loved the story.

Great story, can't wait for the next one.

Mom should have gotten one as well...

Great story - loved it! :)

Thank you for a very good story. I can understand not wanting a follow up story, but all the pieces are there should you get inspired. I'm sure your fans would love it. Just saying ;-)

Enjoyed the story. Only gripe I have is that the overuse of 'baby' at times was actually distracting to me.

I'm a big fan of natural sounding dialogue, which it was not quite often in this story. You also had the mom saying baby every time she spoke which almost made me quit reading several times. 3/5 is the best I could give this one.

So freaking good!

Good story, as usual, but can't help and think how sad it is that Mark had to pick up his dads scraps. Not that he didn't get love out of it, just a sad thing.

Very enjoyable. Parts were a bit predictable, but part of that is just knowing these stories, and part is that the characters acted true to themselves, which makes predicting behavior possible. All in all, it made me happy, and glad I had read it. 5*

Great story. Thank you

Lovely story, thank you.

Great story indeed I enjoy longer reads like this. Thanks for writing

Good story but the part about Candice and mom being together was really sad yet the part that they only did it while he was around was understandable

I didn't want to swear, but fucking brilliant, a great story written very, very well. Although a pity there will be no sequel I totally understand. Big can of worms.

Thank you, sorry only 10 out of 5 stars.

Good read well told

Excellent story as I always expect from you. One question, wouldn't the DNA been similar being father and son?

Mmmmm… well, it was a well told story. Of course, I expect nothing less from you. I’m not a big fan of mother/son incest because even the best stories come across (to me) as a bit unseemly. That said, I did enjoy the twist of turning the couple into a threesome, and getting revenge on Brian was appropriate even if they method was a little weird.

Thank you again for anther amazing story

You are so so good writer UltimateSin. A always look forward for your stories. This one was again amazing!!

I enjoyed this one. Thanks.

This is my first time, I think, reading your submissions and you did a very fine job. Love the way everything was put together and presented to us. Heck of a love story! Thanks, now following. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐'s.