All Comments on 'The Second Coming'

I enjoyed this one a lot and can be sexual putting us on border between heaven and earth during ecstasy, or it can be just spiritual. Plus you used the word "proton" ;)

Never quite got that far myself. But, wow.

Ten, nine, eight,

seven, six, five, four

Love it! Best intro to a poem ever.

The title of this poem's a tease

I thought it would show DK's ease

At fucking her lover

And then going again for another

Orgasm, but alas! There's no sleaze.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

So I read it again. It's quite hot

In fact, I like it a lot

Sex is a god-given gift

Which gives humans a lift

If you choose to fuck aliens (or not).

Poems and rhymes - get it for most part, but seemed overdone. Detracted from message/feeling.

I was reading this looking for subtle, subliminal sexual metaphors. If they're there, they're buried deep. But it's beautifully crafted eschatology. If you're into that. And a little beautifully terrifying if you're not.

Wonderful collision of natural forces and spiritual fulfillment!