All Comments on 'The Headland'

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PixiehoffPixiehoff12 days ago

What a beautiful poem of longing and loss my darling - 5 stars from me xxxxx

KatieHoneyKatieHoney12 days agoAuthor

Thank you Pixie. A difficult one to write x

CharlotteYM7CharlotteYM712 days ago

Heart wrenching and beautifully poignant Katie xxx

JorunnJorunn11 days ago

You could be standing on the shores of Norway hoping the Viking men return from a raid, or on the ships of Holland waiting for the Dutch East Indies ships, or for all the British sailors when Brittania ruled the waves. Or perhaps, the Titanic? Or on any warships of any age. Or the family of Irish immigrant, wondering? Or, even today, with any lost love. Very universal and timeless.

KatieHoneyKatieHoney11 days agoAuthor

Thank you Charlie x

KatieHoneyKatieHoney10 days agoAuthor

Thank you for that amazing feedback Jorunn x

Paul4playPaul4play9 days ago

Beautiful!

The imagery and emotion are powerful.

The wind and gulls are very present.

The longing is painful.

Well done!

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