All Comments on 'You Will Show Me Everything Ch. 01'

Short and sweet, but hot. I like the detail about looking into the camera. You do a good job capturing the panicked flurry of thoughts that stream through her head. Looking forward to the next chapter. Five stars.

I love this story and would love to read more to this story.

Present tense gang! I like how you didn't delve into all the backstory of how she got into that mess. You made it plausible through her psychology alone.

And the way you really hit on the shame and power dynamics, that's pure exhibitionsism. Wonderfully descriptive and perfectly paced.

Glad to see it's a woman exposing herself in your story, not a man.

I personally in the next chapter would like to hear her thinking about how she got where she is. this chapter was great as is. I don't see the need for her blackmailer or whatever he is(if it is a he) to expose her to quickly or all the drama will be gone, he needs more ammo to keep her going for awhile.