All Comments on 'Irresistible Forces'

Great story!

Very good story. Well written with likable and believable characters. The plot was quite simple but kept me interested, and ticked along nicely. The climax at the cabin finished it all off well. Perhaps my only issue was Cynthia and the reveal about her past. I felt it was unnecessary and unneeded, the story was strong enough without it. It felt, at least to me like the author wanted to burn somebody, so chose an old cliché of the cheating, slut wife. It couldn't be Tammy without ruining the whole story, so a supporting character was chosen instead. It was unexpected and, as I said, unnecessary. Otherwise a very good read.

I loved it. 5-stars. The ending was a happy one and it sort of made sense. Cynthia was being so snobbish and cold to Tammy because she WAS afraid that Tammy knew her secret. Besides that, someone had to be cheating to let the story match the Loving Wives parameters. Well written and if not for Cynthia cheating on Randell with Bobby Lee this could have been in the Romance category. Thanks for writing and sharing this story.

Really well written story. Suspense, danger, resolution. Excellent

5 stars if only for the one line: "He said I gave killer head.". LOL! Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us.

Great story of love overcoming all odds!

Excellent. More please.

That had some of the funniest dialogue that has been my pleasure to read in a long time. Thank you. I can almost see a misfit buddy romance loving wives assassin team trope-y series developing out of the energy vibe you established here. Or not… 🤓

Loved it, thank you.

Trailer trash was something foreign before reading this. Now it is foreign, hilarious, lusty, lovely and looney. Thanks for the expanded definition.

Absolutely loved this story! Well done, thanks. More please.

Very good. Best story on here in a long time. Probably going to hear from the grammar nazis but I noticed nothing that distracted from the story. Easy to score 5👍s.

Loved it best dialogue in a story that I have read in some time.

Completely unexpected and very entertaining. Thank you for sharing.

So funny and original. I just loved it! 5*****

Very enjoyable story, great characters and even with the drama and violence, it was mostly a fun read and a great ending.

Beautiful, touching story. I did NOT see the Cynthia twist coming until it was right in my face. That doesn't happen often on this site. 4.9*

excellent

Not sure white hot sex is the best way to start a relationship, but it makes for an interesting story. Guess this one gets a one pickax handle rating. POW! And five stars as well.

Sounds like a perfect wife. A guy can dream.

Wow! Not often someone gets comments like you have already. And I agree with every damn one of them. Thanks for the entertainment and sharing your talent.

A really good story for a change. 5 solid Stars

The originality of your writing talent is nothing short of impressive. This story is original, humorous, and HOTTTTT even if LW is a hard Genre to crack.

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6****** Hooyah, Salutes.... and I'm a stingy rater.

Thank you for the entertaining read I thoroughly enjoyed the story. You achieved something some writers miss out on, which is writing likeable characters that I cared about. 5 stars.

That was just awesome. Your writing is excellent and you can tell a tale with the best of em. Truly a Loving Wife story. Thank you!!!

Great story !

Fantastic!

Please keep’em comin!

Great read thanks.

Excellent. Well written. Great characterization. Well done. Thank you very much.

AWESOME absolutely AWESOME. animal attraction is REAL my wife of 50+ years and can attest to that

Great story! 5/5 BRB

Epic. Great story!!

Fabulous . TC Ireland

Wow, where did this come from? I'll have to agree with the author- it aint great literature, but it IS a great story. Started reading it and thought, this is silly.... there's no way.... then I just got wrapped up in it. Couldn't stop reading. It's a clear 5 from me.

I was reading this story thinking damn I love these people please don't ruin them. Enter from stage left the asshole. But OK after some drama things worked out and I was happy. I have to say I was literally laughing loudly when she mentioned the "killer blowjob" Five Stars.

Well that was a fun ride! Well written and completely engaging!

Humor,suspense and drama what more could a reader ask for.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Helluva Story. Thank you. 5⭐

This is the kind of story that loving wives was supposed to have, rather than the tired, BTB, trope driven, cliched "We need to talk" junk it has been bullied into today. It is not often I give a 5 in this category, but this has earned it.

Loved it. You put a smile on my face!

Awesome story! Very creative and love the Tammy and Cam characters.

I enjoyed this a lot! Thank you!

5*

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Be well!

Rarely comment as I use the app, but that was well worth logging in to say what a breath of fresh air for a LW story! Crackin' characters, nice flow, & great dialogue & humour.

I look forward to reading your other stories & any future works.

Man, I can't believe I almost missed this story. It's so incredibly good. I love the characterizations in this story, it really makes it pop and come to life. Hell I just wish there was more in the middle so I could have enjoyed it more! Well done.

4 stars - I liked everything but the violence - I skipped past that - the rest of the story was amazing.

Please keep writing.

Have a nice day.

Quite good, erotic, dramatic, romantic, with humor

Basically almost perfect, I really enjoyed it.

Best line in a well-written story is probably from the no-nonsense female police detective, Washington, near the end, "I was going to recommend counseling, but, after this, I'm starting to think I'm going to need it more than you two."

Five for you

Didn't think I would like it but, it was very good.

I absolutely loved this. You have no idea.

As of now, this is one if my favorites. So many parts of it made me just crack up. Great job

tconnell71@gmail.com

South Georgia

Excellent character development. This tale is more than a little weird, but it's so well written that it's convincing. The best story I've seen here in quite a while.

That was a great story. That killer head Tammy was giving Bobby Lee was off the charts. A broken maul handle is a LW secret weapon.

The instant intense attraction between the protagonists wasn't credible. Other than that, great, gripping story

Outstanding story.

Fun read. A irresistible force drove them together. Beyond the pale.

A decent plot, except for the major Fail: He was "looking" for a weapon? Why didn't he reach into his glove compartment and pull out his Glock 43X? Hell, even my wife has one of those, in a locked vault under the car seat. You panty waist gun phobes are pathetic. So he converted to being a gun lover, after he Really needed a gun. Too little too late. I wonder how many people wish they had been more proactive in their self defense, as they lay bleeding to death.

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You can type whatever words you want. In the real world the women are murdered and the axe handle gets shoved up the dumb shit's ass, before the predator kills him too. Then its back to prison due to the security cameras, where all the still living sheep pay for his room and board, some more. People are dying and women are getting beaten while you wrote this, because protecting yourself with deadly force is socially and politically unacceptable. Just pathetic.

Agree with the consensus, very witty story. Didn't notice even 1 cliche, and that ain't easy. As somebody said, likeable characters.

Thanks for your story.

A most excellent story. Impressive. 5+ stars.

Now THAT is a loving wife.

Hmmm.

Methinks that the side the mirror is reflecting is the alt of another author.

Love it, well done!

Excellent.

I kept waiting to be heartbroken by some infidelity. Thank goodness. Really good sideways romance

Very good.

Unusual, fun and interesting.

This was one fine story.

Top ratings from me.

Very good and original.

5* indeed.

This was just great. So much and so far beyond the usual hateful dreck on LW. Thank you for this entertaining and uplifting gift.

Gosh!

That’s a loving wife !

Thanks. Definitely in the right category,

Loved this advanced Cinderella story and the more humanized version of the characters. I don’t usually like stories with long, drawn out sex scenes but I enjoyed it here as much as Tammy did. You have my five stars and my plan to reread it.

Thanks!

Great story! Thanks

A different story twist with an interesting female lead. Loved the happy ending for most of the folks. 5*.

Loved it.

Cheers,

Captcha

Bravo! Very well done. Five stars.

Good stuff. Nice to read a postive ending as well as uplifting. Thanks

I almost stopped reading this one, not because of bad writing or a terrible story but because I'd already gotten to really like the characters and, this being loving wives hated the idea of turning her into a cheater.

Glad I continued on. What a great story! Please keep writing.

It's rare seeing a twist you don't expect in LW. You managed to do that. In this section with most stories being a checklist of tropes, it's not easy at all.

The story even managed to include both iterations of a loving wife. Both the literal and the usual slut.

cute, thanks for writing

Absolutely loved this story, M! Great read , thank you for sharing!

eh had me routing against the MC half way down the first page. guess i'll see how it ends

oh for god''s sake u even gave the MC 6 kids dislike him even more at the end lol. guess they never got the overpopulation memo

Nice story!

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

Loved the dialogue! Tammy is a unique and lovable if not somewhat crazy character.

On my favorite list for sure.

Great story. Looking forward to more of your work.

What a great story!! Thanks DerMtMan

Well done! Very enjoyable!

Absolutely amazing story. I was kind of worried when the first paragraph said it's not a BTB; but the author completely subverted my expectations - in a good... well GREAT way. Entertaining, original, unexpected, and justice served to almost all concerned (the only possible minor improvement would have been Randall getting happily ever after; after his divorce; and to lesser extent, whoever released Bobbi Lee, should go to jail). 9 stars out of 5.