All Comments on 'The Coming of Aphrodite Pt. 01'

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tangledweed 26 days ago

Surprised to not see any other comments on such a great story. I am loving the characters in this one and the different kinds of politics in play by each of them. Hypergamy is exceptional at using her "soft skills" to get her way, despite basically having slave status. Looking forward to more. Full marks from me.

dontyouwishyouknew 26 days ago

Good start!

KachinaDoll 26 days ago

I absolutely loved it and can't wait for Part 2. A definite 5*

Anonymous15 days ago

On the contrary, I love investing time in a story such as this. This is how erotica should be done, a great story foremost, but interwoven with wicked hot monkey sex. I regret that I just found it and am off to read the next chapters. 5/5 stars, and I'm sorry they don't allow me to give more.

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I write both professionally and for fun. The stories and essays I post on this site are for fun. I've also taken the first steps to self-publishing under the name Freddie T Camel, although more as an experiment than an ambition. I want to write stories that have emotional res...

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