All Comments on 'Linda's Visit'

Wow! Thank you for this. Let's just say that you teased this reader as well as Linda did her grandson - and with a similar effect! Please keep this story going, or others like it. I wouldn't want Linda to get lonely....

A nice start to the story. Hopefully Yvonne will be able to enjoy some fun soon.

Very nice... looking forward to more adventures!

Nicely done Linda, nicely done indeed! Reminds me of my mother-in-law after my divorce! Please continue the story!

Thank you all for the wonderful comments (both public and anonymous), feedback and votes. I'm overjoyed seeing my first story get such a warm reception. While I do have ideas of where I would want a further storyline to go, please don't expect a new chapter any time soon. If and when I post it, I want it to live up to my own standards, and I don't want to get into a "rinse and repeat" rhythm just for the sake of it.

Thank you again, and I hope you'll all enjoy yourselves.

Hot story. Touches on a male fantasy even though IRL I’d not want to touch my wife’s parents.

Solid first story.

That is a great story and first chapter. No way this can stand alone, you did a wonderful job of creating characters we care about and want to hear more from. Nicely done.

Very readable and very arousing in so many ways. Just stick to your principles and write what feels right for You. You have a lot of talent and should be proud of yourself

Superb