by bluedragonauthor
Another great chapter.
I'm enjoying the development with Eva. The fact that it's stretching out over multiple chapters gives it a sense of reality.
I have been a huge fan of this series since I first found it and I have yet to be disappointed in even a single chapter. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing it.
...First, Matt doesn't put Belle on Ice...he lets her manipulate him...again. I know how hard it is to not let an abusive, manipulative lover you feel bad for get what they need. Second, Skylar showing her hesitance, because of how busy she is. Third, Niamh still being super insecure. Fourth, Eva having a switch flipped by "Me and you against the world." Her manipulative, "Don't reject me now," schpiel is almost as bad as Belle.
Matt's almost becoming unlikable because of his weakness, but hey, it's a phenomenally written story.
This was unexpected. And now I am really curious about Eva's story.
In any case: I love all the characters, I love your writing style (though sometimes the sex alliterations can be a bit on the nose) and I really love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Talk about a cliffhanger.... another 10/10 and I'm so ready for the next part you wouldn't believe it
Aaarrggghhhhh!!!!!!!! Stop with the cliffhangers!!! It's rude,unfair,twisted and downright despicable. Next please ???
And then there were five—five girls, five lovers, and five ⭐️s. I wish I could be a Chicago resident and vote early and often. This chapter, for me, is top three in the hallowed halls of the BTC.
Great story, as always. I am glad that Eva took Matty on her own terms.
Go Bears!
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