by Spyder23
I enjoyed this one. Both Pt 01 & Pt 02 were well written and created vivid imagery for the tales as told. I enjoyed this one much more than the Pt 01. Pt 01 was a good it just did not move me on the necessary emotional level to rank better than a Good Read ⭐⭐⭐ rating.
While in real life the good guys don’t always win. I like the way you had them win in this one.
This is the 1st of your series/tales that I have read. I will have to see if your others are up to the standards of creativity you showed in this series. I hope so. It will give me another good writer to follow.
I am looking forward to your future productions.
Keep Writing
JH4Fun
Not familiar with your works, but the title intrigued me. Will have to read more of you stories now. 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I hadn’t planned on it but a few thoughts are rattling around in my head and I’m working on a part 3.
Thanks. I really got into your story and will be watching for Chapter 3. Well told, like a movie.
Good story, ended to soon. I thought he'd end up with Lisa, and live happily ever after. Five stars.