by Rob_Royale
Great story.
But the build-up with the assistant, Susan seemed to be leading to something, then just disappeared. So, it seems like you had or have more ideas in the works for this couple.
5!
5 Stars and a favorite! Really well done! You knocked this one out of the park, Rob. I loved how beautifully you captured the passion and emotion they were feeling toward each other as they made love.
Kind of a fun story...
...4 stars from here for a clever idea of a couple who do love each other.
If she hadn't said "I don't know" to his last question, I probably would have gone to 5 stars. I just thought that cheapened it just a bit.
I enjoyed the story, very different than the usual. I liked Keri telling the guy to go home to his wife.
Cute as all get out. Well written and tightly focused. Thanks to the author for deviating from the typical cuck bullshit.
Many thanks. I enjoyed the story. Mainly BECAUSE it was a married couple that were both intelligent enough to immediately catch on what was happening then decide to take advantage of the situation, for themselves. Playing out the role of a "hooker" with her own husband is an often mentioned fantasy of many women. So, thanks again. Cheers. Oh, yes, it would have been rather interesting if her husband had "thrown" the golf game for some reason. (It happens) What would she have done then regarding her bet and a possible BJ for Anton? Ha. f
That is an AWESOME storey, had me wondering what she was going to do. This could have a number of more chapters, with them doing similar adventures, or maybe buying the Withlacoochee River in Sumpter County property and having fun there. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Keeping things spicy between a loving monogamous couple should be everyone's fantasy.
Good premise and well written. I liked that hubby was bright enough and trusting enough to play along without missing a beat.
You shouldn't need to explain your story. Any intelligent reader will understand exactly what's going on. I have gotten few comments on my stories from confused readers as well but they are the exception rather than the rule.
I, for one, very much appreciate a sexy story about two married people in love without all the extramarital shenanigans. That's kind of my thing, too. Role playing is fun and healthy and sexy as hell.
Loved it.
No problem at all with Kerri/Peaches. But I was speed reading and confused Andy/Anton - but not for long. You're right it was an unusual submission for Loving Wives. Well done - 5 stars.
J
An excellent love story with an interesting twist in the plot. The story was well written, with great dialogue and the sex scene was realistic. There was some risk involved, but it was minimal and the three other males were disappointed until they were told they were married.