by NorthernNewEnglandGuy
That was really fun. My wife, Mother of our five daughters, will love it.
5*****
You are worried about suspension of disbelief on a website that routinely has stories of women with tits the size of basketballs and men with 12inch dicks that can last half a day?
A unique concept for a story and well thought out. It's even ecologically sound!
I have read all of NNEG's submissions and loved them all, but this is special. This one is subtle and hilarious at the same time. It is short, and honestly could have been shorter as the transition from one closet to another is in itself an ending, although you shouldn't take negatively. It set up a challenge that NNEG succinctly addresses in the post script.
THANKS
What a great idea, I loved this wonderful read. I look forward to more of this type of story from you. It's a wonderful concept and a superb story, keep up your work.
I found the ending disappointing, though, unless there's a part 2 starting with Helen.
Only 4 stars as a result -- I was planning to give five.
Well that was definitely a different take! I liked it. Really nice fun read.
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