by Goldeniangel
This was such a fun and lively story as I have read in a long time. By all means write the next part, does he have another visit from her or a new girl.. perhaps she'll stay with him forever??? time will only tell :).
But then again, I'd expect nothing else coming from you. Very interesting story, I'm looking forward to more.
This is a great story, I'd really like to read more! Another excellent story by one of the most talented authors on the site!!
I loved ur story pleaze keep going. I would love to read more. please keep writing and ill always leave u good comments. ^_^
by: cat
p.s: i love ya
Write a sequel, this story has the potential to become a very good novela or even just a small series of erotic stories.
S.N.
Please is it posible for you to continue this? It has some damn fine writing.
DO MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOUR AN AWESOME AUTHOR!!!!!!!
CONTINUE! PLEASE!!! :D
Write more! That was interesting, yet very erotic! Great work :)
story held me from the beginning,not the same crap,i felt for her,has the beginng of a great story platform,dependons on were you take it...
In the sixties there was a popular song about a guy who spent the night in a haunted house. One of the lines was, "Ain't no haint (sp?) gonna run me off!" I feel the same way about this story. This one, like just about all of your other submissions, is simply awesome! I am continually amazed at your imagination and your story telling is great. If you don't write the next chapter, I will come find you and make a "haint" out of you!! (I'm just kidding, of course.) But I do anticipate the next chapter. JohnT
there are a lot of grammatical errors you should check before submitting and what does this mean "reading to kiss his ghost girl " you wrote it, now explain it?
It was amazingly hot for a short story. You should definitely write a sequel!
Your story ended far too quickly! You just gave us a taste of this enjoyable story!