All Comments on 'Good Man in a Bad Time'

by Pasego

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madengineer3madengineer3over 15 years ago
This is an excellent story!!

This story is very well written and is believable. The man is a gentleman and the woman is not a tramp. It is nice to see tenderness and realistic feelings in a story. This story has both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved It!!

What a beautiful story. I would love to see you continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
AWESOME!!!

This was just beautiful!! I hope you plan on adding maybe another part to see things from 'Jeff's view'? That would be brilliant! Great writing!!!!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonover 15 years ago
Beautiful

A very well written and realistic story. Your two characters were portrayed very well and despite the length of the story I was able to get a really good feel for and of them. I do hope you consider continuing this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awww

So sweet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very Nice

Well written romantic and sweet. Fleshed out it would make a decent romance novel actually.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice Story

Well written and he didn't have a 10" prick as in too many stories

TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69over 15 years ago
Tender Love

This has to be the best story that I have read on here in months and months ! Thank you very much for such a tender love story that only fairy/tales are made of. I do hope you plan on a few more chapters to bring these two people together in only a way that I feel you can do. I know your other readers will feel the same way. There are so many ways you could go with this story to make everybody happy. Thank you again. JAG

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Beautiful!

I know beautiful isn't exactly a common verb when describing an erotic story, but that's the only way I can say it. I love the attentiveness and tenderness of your stories! Please write more!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
absolutely delightful

it seemed so perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
more!

I loved it! Think you can provide a sequel with her plans?

am_sram_srabout 13 years ago
buen hombre en un mal momento

es una hermosa historia, que podria continuar, espero que si, te felicito, am_sr

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Love it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Naugh

Didn't seem like the correct position to take a virgin by having her with the pillow so described. Guess the author never took a virgin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

1* for not knowing where the hymen is!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Nice short-story. Love it

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 1 year ago

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Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

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