by Pasego
This story is very well written and is believable. The man is a gentleman and the woman is not a tramp. It is nice to see tenderness and realistic feelings in a story. This story has both.
This was just beautiful!! I hope you plan on adding maybe another part to see things from 'Jeff's view'? That would be brilliant! Great writing!!!!
A very well written and realistic story. Your two characters were portrayed very well and despite the length of the story I was able to get a really good feel for and of them. I do hope you consider continuing this.
Well written romantic and sweet. Fleshed out it would make a decent romance novel actually.
Well written and he didn't have a 10" prick as in too many stories
This has to be the best story that I have read on here in months and months ! Thank you very much for such a tender love story that only fairy/tales are made of. I do hope you plan on a few more chapters to bring these two people together in only a way that I feel you can do. I know your other readers will feel the same way. There are so many ways you could go with this story to make everybody happy. Thank you again. JAG
I know beautiful isn't exactly a common verb when describing an erotic story, but that's the only way I can say it. I love the attentiveness and tenderness of your stories! Please write more!
es una hermosa historia, que podria continuar, espero que si, te felicito, am_sr
Didn't seem like the correct position to take a virgin by having her with the pillow so described. Guess the author never took a virgin.