All Comments on 'Jacuzzi Ch. 03'

in reality --Al accepts this --Many men would not --I mean she didn't just slip --My God she had multiple sex sessions with them including ANAL --She decieved him for 10 yrs -when even she wasn't sure whos kid it was -- AND she even said she enjoyed it! Even taking them both on at one time!!!!!!!!!!!!great sorry - Sick and warped as she is!

god almighty please stop writing this kind of shit. It is vile awful non erotic absurd crap.

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the whore wife is in jacuzzi drinking with two guys who slip off the bathing suits and she doesnt know what to do becasue she doesnt wnat to make a scene?

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You cannot be fucking serious

I would merely lean over and run a sharp blade across the whore's throat, then I would hunt down the other four people and burn them alive. Probably slowly torturing the other wife for a few hours first. Everyone in this story including the author who thought this shit up is a DISGUSTING WORTHLESS VILE PATHETIC EXCUSE FOR A HUMAN.

Why the hell don't you just write about raping children, burning kittens in the microwave, or beating puppies to death with a club. It is that same shot that you have the people in your stories doing. In the real fucking world people die over crap like this.

Solid ideas, new approaches etc, and its obvious you put a lot of work into them, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE stop writing the same scenes twice. Please!

And "Complete garbage" below, just chill eh, maybe you should stop reading here if it upsets you so much.

As always well written thoughtful story. But please change the record. And also come up with a better reason for sex than "I didn't want say no!" okay yes these things happen. The couple get caught up in something they don't really understand. But instead of backing away and leaving the hosts to do whatever, they don't want to upset the hosts, so they have sex with them. As people do! then after keeping a secret for so long she blurts it out. now was that an 'accident'? sounds a bit suspect to me. I suppose on the plus side she only had sex with three other men in 25 years of marriage so that's not so bad is it? Okay it is three men too many. But hey no ones perfect. I just wanted hubby to turn around and say he had flings with pam and her other friends because he knew about his wifes affair with pams male friends. and he had fathered a whole host of kids. But then that wouldn't make him a wimp would it? on the subject of wifes affair how long is an affair? in this story she claims she had sex once with these people or at least once or twice over a couple of days or so. So what time frame turns something like this into a fully fledged affair as aposed to a fling? Just wondering.

Many thoughts come to mind. I enjoyed the story but.....<p>

The couple was obviously very naive to start with. Let's give them a break and say that their naivete got them in trouble in the first instance. <p>

The incident with Howard and Grant is pure stupidity on her part. Given their history with Pam and Neill, she should have known what was coming up as soon as the officers arrived. That was the time to, "get out of Dodge". <p>

The duplicity is actually three-fold Pam and Neill are obviously not friends. At least I wouldn't want friends like them. They had to know the effect of the first incident on Marty and Al. The second stunt was nothing short of predatory and disregarded entirely the potential damage to their alleged friends marriage. And then for Marty to keep secret for 10-years the fact that she had not only been unfaithful, but wasn't sure either of their children was Al's is incredible.<p>

Frankly, I can't imagine why they continued to have contact with this couple. These were not friends. These were people whose only interest was in trying to get others involved in their lifestyle. Given the lifestyle Pam and Neil led, and the cause of Neill's death (how appropriate, too bad he didn't take Pam with him), I hope Marty and Al had themselves tested as well. <p>

All in all, about the only likeable character in the story is Al. He knew they both made a mistake and never repeated it. If he traveled with Neil, and we know he did, I am sure Neil must have pressured him to "play" on the road. We are led to believe he never fell into that trap. Too bad his wife wasn't as upstanding.

Many thoughts come to mind. I enjoyed the story but.....<p>

The couple was obviously very naive to start with. Let's give them a break and say that their naivete got them in trouble in the first instance. <p>

The incident with Howard and Grant is pure stupidity on her part. Given their history with Pam and Neill, she should have known what was coming up as soon as the officers arrived. That was the time to, "get out of Dodge". <p>

The duplicity is actually three-fold. <br>

1) The initial set-up and swap<br>

2) The second set-up and affair<br>

3) Marty's failure to avoid the affair and her actions since, including keeping quiet about her fear the daughter was not her husband's.<p>

Pam and Neill are obviously not friends. At least I wouldn't want friends like them. They had to know the effect of the first incident on Marty and Al. The second stunt was nothing short of predatory and disregarded entirely the potential damage to their alleged friends marriage. <p>

Frankly, I can't imagine why they continued to have contact with this couple. These were not friends. These were people whose only interest was in trying to get others involved in their lifestyle. Given the lifestyle Pam and Neil led, and the cause of Neill's death (how appropriate, too bad he didn't take Pam with him), I hope Marty and Al had themselves tested as well. <p>

Marty's actions in the affair are also indefensible. She had many opportunities to avoid the problem, but she failed to take advantage of any of those opportuniteis. All in all, about the only character of integrity in the story is Al. He knew they both made a mistake and never repeated it. If he traveled with Neil, and we know he did, I am sure Neil must have pressured him to "play" on the road. We are led to believe he never fell into that trap. Too bad his wife wasn't as upstanding.

It was a good story and thank you for it.

She was lucky the child was her husbands and that they didn't split up over this. Also with friend haveing A.I.D.s they or she could have picked up some S.T.D.s from swinging and her slutting around. He is lucky she felt bad and stoped, she could have kept going. This is more trus to life than most of these stories. It takes a special kink to enjoy a partner enjoying sex and all envolved with someone else. The problems usually outweigh the fun. Thanks.

I have ever read on this site! First of all you are an excellent writer. But the issue is the content of this story. Here we have a loving committed to each other couple who get 2by4 wood plank hints that there friends want them to swing with them. The bikini and what Al said about them being swingers set the stage for what would likely happen during the Jacuzzi christening. So did they talk about fucking other people? No! Then we have the whole Jacuzzi play out and we the readers get a POV from Al and Marty that maximizes their "innocence." Come on! Marty led them into whole scene but she sheds the "buyer's regrets" tears. Then we have the stupid statements from Al implying that they were obligated to be Neil and Pam's entertainment for the weekend. There is no explaination why Marty left Al during the night to switch with Sam without talking to Al first. They have bareback sex with these avowed swingers but no STD checkup. Lastly, we have Marty's confession years later of her fucking Grant and Harold based upon a slip of the tonque (based upon writing about the Jacuzzi episode)? Huh! Marty really believes in this don't ask don't tell. She claims to be a honest person just because the subject never came up before? How many other men or women did she fuck which she never mentioned? Should Al go through a list of names to see if she had "flings" with them? Another problem is that Al is the Wimp in this story. I guess he passed the Cuckold's Test when his wife told him in passing about a weekend fuckfest with two men and he basically got over it. Sorry but as a cuckold story it was not that interesting or original.

SleeplessinMD

I was afraid, before reading it, that you threw the final chapter in so that you could break up the marriage and send the couple down the road along their separate ways. Sometimes humiliation, revenge and divorce are in order. This time forgiveness and reconciliation made the story more enjoyable for me. Keep writing!

and would have lied for another twenty if she hadn't blurted out the guy's names. Not only did she lie to im but Pam and Neil also lied to him...so much for how much he was thought of by them. He shuld let her live by herself the rest of the time..not with him. He is still young enough to find a woman to share his life..theres pleanty out there that are looking. But as far as real married loving honesty..no way marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

the previous chapters average marks,but not this one, as I wonder how many more the slut fucked without him knowing about it.He would not have known about this second event if she had not blurted it out by mistake.Your stories are quite well written,but if you do not start writing about men with backbones(unlike this poor specimen of a husband)then I will not bother reading any more.

why not ask about stan and ollie or fred and clint and his little brother. what the fuck is wrong with you? allmost a decent story about a little bit stupid people and then this end. both dna faked, so no kids. a woman who shows concern but fucks a least twice other man with no and I mean no prtotection at all. no pill and no condom. what a sick mind do you have to think thats erotic. in time of aids (one of the fuckers died) you write it as it is a gentlemans little mistake. and on the top you fuck around with the sanely upbringing of kids just because you tink it erotic when a marriage falls or could fall apart ? hey please think before you write such shit. are you really a man? or just a fucked up woman?

is, first of all, Bl, a poorly told 15th Century Morality Tale If you really want to do a Morality Tale, then have the couple climb out of the jacuzzi and go home in the first story, or, with all of the "hoopla" about their discussion of the night with Neil and Kim and their negative feelings about it, have them sever the relationship socially and make the only contact with them be between Al and Neil at work. Just tell us up front that you are trying to sell us a story about being "moral" in our marriage relationship.

What a hypocrite. Marty is going to Pam and Neil's without her husband. She knows they are swingers. She expected something to happen. She prepared for it by shaving her pussy. Yet this is the same woman that tells Pam and Neil after their swinging session that her husband is all she will need in the future. Never again. Hah!<P>

Her feeble self rationalizations are ridiculous. She never utters a single reservation the entire night. As a matter of fact she admits to actively encouraging what happens. She has no respect for her husband and has unprotected sex with two total strangers who she knows nothing about except they apparently are swingers also. And she does it when she is fertile. For ten years she raised a child and was uncertain as to who the father was.<P>

She is a coward. Too bad she did not give Al the opportunity to make the decision on whether or not to stay in the marriage immediately after she had sex with 2 men at the same time. She suffered with self guilt? Good! She deserved to suffer. Too bad she didn't tell him that it was okay to have sex with other women. That it was okay to maybe have children with other women. That it was okay to have a threesome with other women. It would have been nice if they had been playing by the same set of rules all those years.<P>

In my opinion he forgives her too quickly. It may have happened 20 years ago but for him the hurt is brand new. Thanks for sharing.

All I can say it was well written, unfortunately it was well written garbage. She's s WHORE, plain and simple, not even a good excuse and she rubs it in his face. You have to understand she is ok because it was so long ago......he just fucking found out and it's fresh. No fucking way he would kiss and make up. For him it JUST HAPPENED! And no protection and she didn't know if the child was his for so long. All things you could not just forgive. Your male characters are just too weak. You must either be a man hating woman or gay.

I hate wimps, they give men a bad name.

marty admitted this, but were there more? she says no,

but a doubt is raised. there was the deception and thinking it would not be known. hidden out of love? me thinks paternity aside, she showed her love for him.

their wife is a total and complete lying cheating slut who has to worry about whose child she had? Makes me thing the torch the bitch crowd is right, just have an air tight alibi.

you can always trust women to lie and cheat, it is part of their makup. remember eve?

Pathetic at best!

of enjoying creampies unknowingly, now he'll know what he's getting

Please do all of the readers a big favor. Quit writing shithead...

Even in real life, women seem to have a very decietful nature, and have from the very begining of time.

If you've read bibone's stories before then you know the stories make the husband "cuckold central". I have yet to read one of bibones stories that didn't make the husband look like the planet's biggest pussy/wimp. It is the jist of all his/her stories. I often wonder if it isn't a woman writing under a males name.

Women's deceitfulness... certainly a valid comment and it all starts with their "box." I believe Pandora's was first...

And oh by the way regarding truth in editing... did anyone else notice the mistake where BIBones so easily misplaced "Marty" for "Pam" in Jacuzzi Ch. 02?

huecuck is as deranged as that retard duna

...that Neil died of aids...he deserved it. What a scumbag...too bad Pam didn't catch it as well. Who needs those kind of 'friends'.

Not a bad story but you desperately need an editor or to at least carefully proofread. In the first chapter, Al says that he and Marty didn't have sex when they went to bed. In chapt 2, Marty says that they did. You got Neil and Al mixed up a couple of times and you had a total inability to decide if one of the AF guys was named Harold or Howard. That kind of stuff really depreciates a story.

MichaelG

Look at who wrote this bones it is nothing but your typical cuckold loving writer.

Could only muster two stars

She fucked u; and it seems learned to be a better woman - BUT it was a terrible thing to do to him and she failed miserably - she should have known what was happening -

I have to remain skeptical on the fact that there are no more indiscretions on her part. She is obviously easily "manipulated". I put quotation marks around it because she was not manipulated. That was her cover. She KNEW what was going to happen. She accepts an invitation to a swinger's house when her husband is out of town. Hmmm. She shaves right before going to said swinger's house. Hmmm. Two strange men are there and she is "talked" into putting on a skimpy bikini and hopping in the Jacuzzi. Hmmm. I don't buy the naïve wife act. She went there to get fucked because she hadn't had sex in three weeks.

She lied convincingly for 10 years. They even had these "friends" as God parents. She questioned things enough to sneak and do a paternity test of the youngest child. It slipped her mind when the thought of confession came about, but she had enough clarity to do the test. But of course, the test wasn't for her husband. It was only for her own peace of mind. If she hadn't slipped up, she would still be lying to him. I believe in forgiveness, but there is no way that she is trustworthy. The only upside is that she learned her lesson about cheating. But her actions show that she is a fundamentally selfish person. She may not want to hurt her husband, but when decisions get made in her brain, her wants and needs seem to come before his. She may not want to cheat anymore, but by her selfish nature I would be willing to bet that she has other indiscretions.

...risk possibly making a scene? What's a good wife to do? Al best get himself ready for another tearful confession somewhere down the line. This gal can't say no and shows no real desire to learn.

This cum dumpster of a slut needs to die a disease filled death......

Author couldn't remember who was talking mixing up names is a biggie sorry

Pure bullshit.

She was such a stupid whore. He was a stupid cuck.

They were both dumbasses to stay friends with Neil and Pam.

She was a catastrophic slutty bitch.

He was a cuck wimp.

I respect neither of them and actually respect herpes more.

Pathetic.

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That cheater loved talking about her affairs and those of her friends. During time when she owned Candy Store in THREE FORKS MONTANA, one of her married female employees told her about she had screwed a neighbor in a hot tub one night. According to cheater, her best friend had a lover who worked for Montana railroad as engineer. In summer of 2002, the friend was giving engineer a blowjob on train when it derailed near three forks

cuck shit.

This story took a left turn into a huge pile of shit.... Not your best work bones.....?

She suffered, she fucked two guys without protection and you call that suffering

Strong husband? Just a weak cuck who lets others fuck his wife and, when cheated on, just blubbers and says SHE must have suffered terribly. The children are gone. The lying, lack of respect, betrayal, and destruction of true marital intimacy would lead any but a cuck to divorce her....

This marriage is poisoned. There is outward forgiveness, but the minute the foundation cracks, the whole structure is coming down. Marty better hope Al is the first to get sick and Al never finds someone else, because frankly he doesn't owe her much. I hope Al brought her those flowers from a dresser at the whore house he just came from.

She cheated, pure and simple

He should have punished her. Make her pay.

Stay married by all means, but make her pay.

But he wimped out.

What man could cop the disrespect she showed to the man she supposedly loved.

Amongst my set of friends from the last 66 years, NONE!

Don’t care for this at all. This chapter ruined a decent story.

This story definitely not needed. The first 2 were ok, but this just didn't need to be told. Made her out to be more of a slut than she was and for Al to be more of a cuck and a wimp. He should have divorced her for the lies she had hidden. She cheated on him, period. Marty, the slut, got away without any consequences, Al didn't do anything to her, no balls. Sure it was from a few years ago but she still cheated and NEVER told him. In fact, several others knew about her infidelity, Neil and Pam, the two people who originally started the destruction of this pathetic marriage. Sorry but 2 stars on this chapter only.

No her husband was not strong and loving. Authors try to glamorize forgiveness when it is really the easy way out. Cowards are afraid of making it on their own and what the future may bring.

Marty fucked two strange men multiple times over the course of a weekend while using no form of birth control. She soon discovered she was pregnant and had no idea which of three men was the father. She withheld this information from her husband and waited ten years to determine if he is the biological father. She then waited another ten years to tell him the sordid story and only did so because of her own careless mistake.

At the time of her betrayals Al would probably would be a have been due four full weekend vacations from his marriage to Marty with no requirement he inform her what he had done during those times. The interest accrued on those hall passes over the course of 20 years would be huge, and the pregnancy disrespect factor would increase that large number exponentially. Al owes no faithfulness to Marty for the rest of his life. Unfortunately, the sexual partners available to him in a typical dating scenario twenty years after the fact likely would not be fairly compared to those he would have attracted at the time.

Money almost always is helpful in settling debts. One third of their joint assets as a couple should be placed under Al's sole control to acquire and enjoy the services of sexually talented women as he so chooses. He might entice younger single women with lavish trips or choose to employ high end escorts offering the girlfriend experience. Again, Marty deserves no accounting of his activities but hopefully he would share a few pictures with her after each satisfying adventure. Surely the slut would enjoy seeing them.

This chapter verifies her true colours that she's a slut and she wouldn't mind letting Al raise a child that is not his...the fact that she shaved for the occasion....and that the truth had to forced out of her.She is trying to be a Loving Wife but she's certainly NOT...And Al like most husband's here is wimp.

I want to know why the main characters were even still friends with these two raging assholes after that first weekend. They set you up, didn't talk to you about swapping beforehand, didn't wait for everyone to say they were okay with it, then pulled the same shit the next day like it was nothing. They should have been cut off completely after that weekend, especially considering how bad it was for Al and Marty, and their marriage.

Chapter two, you might want to edit it again, you use Marty a lot when you should have used Pam. If the storyteller can't even use the right names, then you have a big problem.

Sluts win out again.

Just another heartless CUNT and a coward wimp husband. It was no mistake. She knew what she was doing and LOVED IT!!! It's more than likely that she has been cheating the whole time. She said she doesn't lie to her huasband. BULLSHIT!!! The Cunt's been lying for 20+ years. Doubtful the kids are Al's just by the timing. Al is a complete coward wimp for not telling her to fuck off and die. But like most of the LW sewer, he just accepts it. She has played him and uses, what ALL women use, tears to cover it up and like the wimp Al is he accepts it because he is too afraid to walk away from the lying Cunt. What a load of shit.

This was a great story. I give it 5 stars! Al is a very special man to forgive Marty her threesome with two strangers. As Marty tells us at the end of the story, if you have the opportunity to do this kind of thing, don’t go there…the price tag is much higher that you expect. Nice job and I hope many of the people reading this story learn the life lesson before they destroy their own marriage with such a terrible life-choice.

Slut wins, cuck loooooses Hopefully Al from that point on goes out and bangs every woman he can. And putting up with a cheating cunt isn’t strength. But yes Al was a very special man - a wimp cuck. Would Marty be so forgiving if Al had a threesome with some hot babes years ago? If she did would that make her a strong woman to forgive Al.

Yes that was a well written and entertaining story and I give it high marks but not a 5. There are two problems that I have in many of these stories, and this one is no exception. The first being the inability of the wife to realize her own cycle and taking the necessary precautions to prevent a pregnancy or STD. The second one is the inability to resist temptation and say NO and walk away. In this case, knowing her horny feelings, she should have passed on the invite and stayed home. Personally, and if this is real, I believe she puts herself in these dangerous situations and allows herself to be caught up in the seduction using "it is out my control, I don't understand why" as an excuse. Then she cries and begs forgiveness and her guilt is gone. She can look back and remember the sex at will. Meanwhile, the marriage survives but the husband forever is damaged by the infidelity. Yet he will never mention his pain because he loves his wife more than himself and spends his years in a happy marriage but with a broken heart.