All Comments on 'Christmas Present Ch. 02'

Gonna take a while 2 cool me off after that. Who cares if it is Piotr or Poitr?! It is your damn story - name whoever you want whatever you want! Cat

I am so glad that you wrote a second chapter. I love it! You truly are an amazing writer.

Loved it!

A wonderful sequel to the first story.

I hope you keep on writing because you have a way of telling wonderful stories! I love it!

Normally, at least to me, sequels rarely if ever rival the original.

This sequel breaks that mold.

Mack

What a truly remarkable story. Word for word an emotional climb to pure ecstasy. There is only one thing that would made this story any better: if I were actually living it out with the man I love. Wonderfully written and expertly full of realistic emotion and passion. Phenomenal story, I will sign up for that role any time!

yet another brilliant story told by a master writer ......fantastic

Just perfect for the holiday season! Good job :)

PALLATON

Romantically beautiful.

Why did you continually refer to them as the older man and the younger man. It sounds as if Gavin was 60 yo and Piotr 18.

Beautifully written sequel (: