All Comments on 'My Best Friend Little Sister'

I loved reading this story, it is very good. I wish that you would write some new stories soon.

Practically unreadable!

Nice effort, but the poor punctuation and grammar makes this story extremely hard to read. You desperately need a good editor.

That was sweet. More of that story please

a hot sexy scene. I would have enjoyed it more if your grammar were better. You have some dialogue, but no quotations. You have commas where they don't belong, and your spell-checking leaves much to be desired. Having said that, this is a story of desire that is worth reading. I hope you write more stories, but try asking someone to proof read your next story.

Your grammar really sucks. Work on it.

I'm really hard

Superb job

Wow, get an editor... this is horrible. Story is decent, but the mistakes detract from it so very badly.